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天在头上 地在脚下
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PostPosted: 2008-10-28 19:29:37    Post subject: 天在头上 地在脚下 Reply with quote
贫瘠是光秃的山
飞不起云的思绪
独立的秋影
走过分辨不出的花季

遥远的亭台
在看不到风景的水边
露出脖子上的脸
也映衬着秋的颜色

飘渺的云雾
是要掩藏真的痕迹
还是想制造假的虚幻
让眼睛里透着不解的迷惑

心在洪晃的时代
冰河似的沉寂了不知道多少个世纪
梦在眨眼的瞬间消失
恍惚回到了远古的从前

于是，生活
变成了不能再简单的画：
天，在头上
地，在脚下
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-10-29 07:50:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
很喜欢最后一段，这一段让前四段黯然失色。
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PostPosted: 2008-10-30 15:00:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
这样天才不会塌~~
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PostPosted: 2008-11-03 19:47:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
很喜欢最后一段，这一段让前四段黯然失色。


平常的日子
不过
一个平常的魂
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PostPosted: 2008-11-03 19:49:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
悠子 wrote:
这样天才不会塌~~


也许本来就塌不了～～
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