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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-08-06 20:44:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

海南丢 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
哈, 抛砖引出这许多美玉来. 看来才子佳人真不少. 问好朋友们


所以,人人,人人,懒卧白水争瘟Laughing


丢丢MM, 你这小调皮.再加100下
bammmmm
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PostPosted: 2007-08-07 07:49:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

留步留步
了断痴情难诉

好词、好词!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-19 15:11:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

转贴网外诗友韦抜的诗词

古韵二首

韵和白水 如梦令 古渡

2008 秋白求恩故乡赏枫


枫叶青山深处
雁阵斜阳穿雾
诗友会英年
秋去如云飞浦
停步
停步
幽谷听风倾诉


卜算子 爱莲

读 弹剑作歌 之 卜算子 莲 有感

性耿直中通,双袖清风舞;
世事人人爱牡丹,尔自嫣然处,

嫣更不攀枝, 了却官场恼,
骤雨初停益俏娇,两颊金珠露。


未经修改,望高手指点。
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PostPosted: 2008-10-20 17:44:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗友韦抜的诗词高雅
羡慕之极,也来画一个:

日照苍山情厚
霜染枫林红透
芦花舞清秋
似水华年流走
高手
高手
风起诗文挥就

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PostPosted: 2008-10-21 07:23:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

和白水 如梦令 秋日感怀

五彩缤纷山麓,
拂面秋风轻舞。
逝水叹华年,
岁月青春难驻。
倾诉,
倾诉,
漫步诗歌辞赋。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-10-22 11:19:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
诗友韦抜的诗词高雅
羡慕之极,也来画一个:

日照苍山情厚
霜染枫林红透
芦花舞清秋
似水华年流走
高手
高手
风起诗文挥就



...

哈, 好一个"风起诗文挥就", 真高手也 Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-10-22 11:27:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
和白水 如梦令 秋日感怀

五彩缤纷山麓,
拂面秋风轻舞。
逝水叹华年,
岁月青春难驻。
倾诉,
倾诉,
漫步诗歌辞赋。
...


QINGHONGH好词, 你那日未能同行真是遗憾,否则赏枫同时又可学到许多知识, 特别是宗教方面. 我学的那点东西,一放下书本又全还给老师了 Razz Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-10-22 11:36:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

看朋友们和的好有趣, 也和一首, 记赏枫一景吧. Very Happy


如梦令 《小醉枫岭》

又聚枫林归处
极目平湖秋雾
纸盏对金杯
调笑清甜浓苦
云步
云步
扶柳推风曰去
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PostPosted: 2008-10-24 09:02:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
看朋友们和的好有趣, 也和一首, 记赏枫一景吧.

如梦令 《小醉枫岭》

又聚枫林归处
极目平湖秋雾
纸盏对金杯
调笑清甜浓苦
云步
云步
扶柳推风曰去
...


潇洒人生
结句尤妙
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PostPosted: 2008-10-25 04:38:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水兄是快手高手!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-25 18:25:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
看朋友们和的好有趣, 也和一首, 记赏枫一景吧.

如梦令 《小醉枫岭》

又聚枫林归处
极目平湖秋雾
纸盏对金杯
调笑清甜浓苦
云步
云步
扶柳推风曰去
...


潇洒人生
结句尤妙


问好冰清老师. 那日诗友同游, 意犹未尽, 第二周全家又去一次, 临时决定多住一晚,傍晚时分平湖薄雾缭绕, 枫红如羞,,,,,,我们无酒自醉, 晕晕呼呼地把车钥匙都锁车里了 Razz Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-10-26 06:58:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
白水兄是快手高手!


谢谢鼓励 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-11-03 20:22:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

远望丛林深处
傍晚微风轻雾
无意忆从前
若见往来江浦
停步
停步
夜曲如歌如诉
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PostPosted: 2008-11-07 13:17:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

无意忆从前
若见往来江浦

有缘好词, 问好周末
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PostPosted: 2008-11-10 22:59:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
无意忆从前
若见往来江浦

有缘好词, 问好周末
问好姐姐 Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 16:03:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]看朋友们和的好有趣, 也和一首, 记赏枫一景吧.
...[/quote]


洒脱人生,好词!
白水轻舒红袖,舞起诗坛好曲如潮!
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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 16:08:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

"风起诗文挥就"好句!
hepingdao 声情并茂,景意交融!
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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 16:42:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

也和白水,hepingdao 一首<如梦令>:

* 如 梦 令 *

诗 坛 斑 斓 如 绣 .
白 水 舞 舒 红 袖 .
众 友 和 声 讴 .
曲 曲 悠 扬 霄 九 .
同 奏 .
同 奏 .
如 梦 令 缤 纷 就 .
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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 17:32:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

见诸君相和心痒,随附一首
恋家
爱似楼阁远处,情如山峰云雾。
异乡思意重,长城汇临江浦。
一步一步,相聚才能听诉。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-25 18:10:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="悟兮轩居士"]见诸君相和心痒,随附一首
...[/quote]

充分拱托悟兮轩居士恋家之情愫!
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