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活着

三弦儿
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Joined: 10 Oct 2008
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Posted: 2008-10-13 20:44:38 Post subject: 活着

活着活着，是勇敢和坚韧四季是翻云覆雨的江湖时间的链条随时断裂失落一地的碎片活着，是黑白的交替一帧帧有痛的划痕机器轧过，过往和现在拷贝着先人的耕作和诗书活着，是无穷的付出那些永远还不清的债务鞭打着身体前行当云霭停在夕阳山峦沉默并不孤独沉淀着散落的痛苦和欢乐

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2008-10-13 21:44:56 Post subject:

沉淀着散落的痛苦和欢乐

三弦儿
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Posts: 68

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Posted: 2008-10-17 08:40:02 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

沉淀着散落的痛苦和欢乐

谢谢点评！！！

韩少君
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Joined: 06 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2008-10-19 12:49:27 Post subject:

读来好累！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

晴宝儿
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Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Posts: 666

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Posted: 2008-10-23 11:22:27 Post subject:

活着，有力！问好！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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