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初恋
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PostPosted: 2008-10-19 05:17:50    Post subject: 初恋 Reply with quote
初恋

青青/涩涩的嫩果刚挂上枝头,
笑意带着些许的羞,
蕴着二分神秘,三分纯朴...

依稀可见:朦胧的笑魇/清澈的双眸
想靠近,却怕那欲笑还颦的模样,
--还有那摄人魂儿的一分娇羞,

想去摘,又怕枝蔓纠缠,刺儿扎着嫩肉,
欲说还休...
惆怅/爱怜/丢了魂魄
泛甜/沾酸/咀嚼的是带苦味儿的果?
别样的人生,古今的客人匆匆而过,
品出不同的滋味儿...
他们说:"一样的醉人,酿着...却未熟透,"
"请勿囫囵吞下"
"尝了一口,再也难寻第二口..."
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PostPosted: 2008-10-19 16:35:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
一样的醉人,酿着...却未熟透.
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PostPosted: 2008-10-20 04:49:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
赵福治 wrote:
一样的醉人,酿着...却未熟透.


谢谢先生阅批~~
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