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《一只蚊子活在冬天》

左岸年华
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Joined: 27 Jun 2007
Posts: 24

左岸年华Collection

Posted: 2008-10-18 22:59:58 Post subject: 《一只蚊子活在冬天》

《一只蚊子活在冬天》它总是试图和以前一样没事就在我枕边嚷嚷这是它炫耀惯了的方式可是，一只蚊子活在冬天多么的不容易今晚，它只想和我说些话不谈及伤害，不谈及爱情今晚，我们多像一对亲兄弟喝酒、谈心、写诗然后活得胆战心惊《我只是一个小丑》站在舞台上，我只是一个小丑。一切都只为你的掌声和欢笑如果哪天不小心，被你看透我的心伤请不要告诉我这样的真像让我继续伪装也不要让我看到了你内心泪水的流淌我只是一个小丑请让我保留最后的一丝勇气继续，站在这个舞台上

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2008-10-19 16:44:11 Post subject:

今晚，我们多像一对亲兄弟喝酒、谈心、写诗然后活得胆战心惊 ...状态不错。

沙漠
秀才

Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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Posted: 2008-10-22 02:44:38 Post subject:

个人觉得第二个砍掉后一半味道就出来了。 _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

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