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(长诗)英雄赞歌
雪松岩
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PostPosted: 2008-10-17 17:53:15    Post subject: (长诗)英雄赞歌 Reply with quote

沉寂多年是你一生中不幸中的不幸
但生活无法让你沉默下来,你必须去战斗
一双双低迷的眼睛在注视着你
他们需要你的救助与扶持,势态刻不容缓

一棵棵无名树在黑泥中轰然倒下
但你迎着凶吉难测的未来笑傲江湖
多少人与你一路同行,多少人又选择了灯红酒绿
而你宁愿孤单,执着要守护你那清淡索味的生活

前进吧,英雄,没有人一生下来就注定是懦夫
你的前进是在给别人带去光明与希望
尽管你前进的道路布满了荆棘沙砾
尽管你必须承受一些流言蜚语与恶意中伤

其实你并没有活在孤独中,穷人们是你的朋友
而你又是如此的有才,你能将你的生活打理得有声有色
你用散文的句式抒写情怀,用跳动的音符增添情趣
你的人生如此美妙,犹如山涧中奔腾而出的清泉

这一生似乎只有你适合医生这个铁饭碗式的职业
这意味着你必须承担起一些必要的道德良知
救死扶伤是你多年重复但又不能轻言卸下的动作
然而你那无怨无悔的表情真叫人以为你是乐在苦中

前进吧,英雄,中国需要你,未来需要你
拿起你的听诊器去细探每一个孱弱的生命灵体
给孩子带去蓬勃的生机,给老人送去持久的微笑
用你的正气之液驱除根深蒂固的病痛与贪欲

沉郁的黄昏里蝙蝠飞翔,月光普照
隔着绿色扒墙的距离我又听到了优雅的琴声
---那是救死扶伤的绝好良药,胜过化学净化灵魂
你的挺拔自信又一次为你赢得了追随者的微笑

都市的繁华在闪烁着迷乱人眼的欲望,你泰然自如
面对同行的排挤与打压你只好选择了你特有的信念
但你不会放弃你多年的梦想,你依然在昂然前进
你的高大形象已为人民谱写了一曲壮丽的英雄赞歌
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-10-18 02:07:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

散文化的一首.
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雪松岩
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PostPosted: 2008-10-20 17:04:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
散文化的一首.




问好
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雪松岩
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PostPosted: 2008-11-01 15:56:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好
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PostPosted: 2008-11-01 21:10:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

此诗几句有感觉,其余的稍微平淡。英雄很难写出新的东西,弄不好变成英雄相对的是凡夫

我很期待长诗下面的句子,希望英雄复活。不过我觉得医生救死扶伤,本身就是英雄。病不
需要歌颂 Very Happy 问好
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雪松岩
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PostPosted: 2008-11-02 16:58:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤城 wrote:
此诗几句有感觉,其余的稍微平淡。英雄很难写出新的东西,弄不好变成英雄相对的是凡夫
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所谓英雄指的是心怀社会责任感和挽救民族危亡的人。英雄是个别的,特殊的,典型的。如果仅仅指已具有某一特征而名其为英雄,我想那是有失偏颇的。泛指就不是英雄了,泛指是凡夫俗子。问好!
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