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与一只飞蛾对视
上城
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PostPosted: 2008-10-15 00:28:17    Post subject: 与一只飞蛾对视 Reply with quote

下巴嗑在桌子上
眯上一只眼
在眉批与脚注之间
连成一条线,
“你好,飞蛾。”

它裸露的额头
狰狞显现
逼视的威严
把慵懒的睡意
驱散得净光,
“独眼巨人,你想怎样?”

与飞蛾对视
嗷嗷待战不可凌犯
一个着白袍的武士
潜伏在“意大利中世纪”
那里是但丁的诗卷
似乎也早已知情

“独眼巨人,你想怎样?”
颤动长须毛很不屑
兀自竖立两架天线
把触角伸向夜空
捕捉天外的神秘
就有一个飞逝的上帝

哦,白袍武士
将躯体旋转就暗含启示
纵起的舞蹈
为这纸上的字行
举行什么仪式

“独眼巨人,你想怎样?”
我想探询
即使微不足道
就有可敬的生命
把看不见的快乐
注入心中

我睁开另一只眼
飞蛾,着白袍的武士
向着桌上的灯扑去
半途跌落进纸箱
——那里塞满了废弃的稿件

嘿,白袍武士
“你又想怎样?”

二〇〇八年十月二日
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-10-15 01:47:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

场景式描述.
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-10-15 02:31:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错的诗。喜欢!!!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-10-15 14:55:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

好丰富的想象力 Very Happy
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钓月
秀才


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PostPosted: 2008-10-15 16:33:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

竟然有如此逸趣!
赏!
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2008-10-15 22:19:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有意味和可咀嚼。
跟最初的诗帖相比,变化是相当大的。
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