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半个秋天
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 06:49:54    Post subject: 半个秋天 Reply with quote
清冷的雨，灰色的天
无法躲避的
是不眠的秋夜
叶子还没有红透，就落了
恰似这愁绪很深的季节
心事如残花，不敢轻易去触动
而枯叶却放纵着秋风
肆意吹走了谁的半个笑容
往事被贴上褪色的标签
一转身，半世迷惘
雾样的浓重
看不见秋的清辉

10/09/2008
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 07:49:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
半个秋天换一个感动，是赚是赔？
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:11:24    Post subject: 只要感动了，管它赚赔~~半个换一个，算赚了 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:12:10    Post subject: 呓，是谁感动了？ Reply with quote
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半个秋天换一个感动，是赚是赔？
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:16:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:17:25    Post subject: 有所感动才写不是？最近忙啥？拯救世界经济～ Reply with quote
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半个秋天换一个感动，是赚是赔？

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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:19:20    Post subject: 晕～要我认同你还是不哪？ Reply with quote
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刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了

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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:34:38    Post subject: 忙生活呀~先拯救自己 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:35:26    Post subject: 得你表态 Reply with quote
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刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:38:00    Post subject: 我都不知道自己有风格哪！或许这正是我的问题所在。 Reply with quote
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悠子 wrote:
刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了

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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:46:06    Post subject: 没说风格哪，只是格式。你那风格太诗盗，仿都仿不来 Reply with quote
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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
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刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:48:47    Post subject: 又疑惑啦！这是赞美还是批评捏。 Reply with quote
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悠子 wrote:
刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了

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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:52:14    Post subject: 等你先堆出半个笑容来 Reply with quote
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悠子 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:55:53    Post subject: 黑！你不能把Ａ坛的事牵扯到Ｂ坛。 Reply with quote
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悠子 wrote:
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悠子 wrote:
刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了

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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 09:59:53    Post subject: 不黑呀，就CLICK一下的差别 Reply with quote
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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
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悠子 wrote:
刀刀，这像不像您的格式？ 剪不剪？
只是半个再剪就没了
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PostPosted: 2008-10-09 10:07:27    Post subject: 当然黑，Ａ是ＡＢ是Ｂ，一个是内场，一个是外场。 Reply with quote
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只是半个再剪就没了

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