红袖添乱 秀才
Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
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Posted: 2008-10-05 09:59:47 Post subject: 夜赋 |
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夜赋 By 红袖添乱
夜雾,环绕着
楚楚开放的幽兰
华清池伊人出浴之后
夜色的黑丝绒
殷勤包裹起伏的山峦
兰花开出流香远溢的诗笺
一瓣儿沾月下的春冰
一瓣儿洒如酥的眼泪
于是,就有了一夜
断魂西厢的不寐,小庭醉歌
我幽幽地,柳 条 画 地。。。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 15:46:44 Post subject: |
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阿要温柔的批判,否则柳条儿刷脸~ _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 15:51:52 Post subject: |
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捞起夜色,好赋新词。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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爱爱 秀才
Joined: 03 Feb 2008 Posts: 167
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Posted: 2008-10-05 15:57:12 Post subject: |
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一瓣儿沾月下的春冰
姐儿, 为什么是春冰不是春水呢? |
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拈花微笑 秀才
Joined: 21 Jan 2008 Posts: 311
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Posted: 2008-10-05 16:15:14 Post subject: |
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月黑喝酒夜,风高醉酒天... _________________ 瞠目结舌 |
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红袖添乱 秀才
Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 17:12:22 Post subject: 觉得早春很冷~~~ |
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爱爱 wrote: |
一瓣儿沾月下的春冰
姐儿, 为什么是春冰不是春水呢? |
_________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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红袖添乱 秀才
Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 17:13:21 Post subject: 柳条轻抽 |
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:) _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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红袖添乱 秀才
Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 17:14:23 Post subject: 早春二月~~幽兰空谷 |
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:) _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 17:21:10 Post subject: 拿竹扫帚抵抗! |
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_________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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红袖添乱 秀才
Joined: 09 Jan 2008 Posts: 778
红袖添乱Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 17:58:01 Post subject: 轻轻的piapiapia~~~~~ |
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haha~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视,
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。 |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-05 18:43:36 Post subject: 睡醒要穿衣服。 |
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红袖添乱 wrote: |
爱爱 wrote: |
一瓣儿沾月下的春冰
姐儿, 为什么是春冰不是春水呢? |
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还要把扣子扣好~(ZT) _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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曲元奇 秀才
Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 427 Location: 山东 曲元奇Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-06 22:44:37 Post subject: |
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第一段 有万象 |
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悠子 举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008 Posts: 1383 Location: US 悠子Collection |
Posted: 2008-10-10 08:05:06 Post subject: |
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难怪西厢老是不安静 |
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