詩盜喜裸評
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 Posted: 2008-10-03 14:50:12 Post subject: 抓一首旧作，改改充和！ |
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寻音
笛音在风中留下脚印
足迹飘邈乐音难寻
四维时空悄然行径
方以冥想空间厘清
要抓住行进间恍如摇摆不停
你蹑手蹑脚的思绪
我蹑手蹑脚的心
猜它是属于谁的笛音
猜它是属于谁的飘逸
或者是风，无意，听
或者是笛音，怡然初醒
于是渴望的睁开眼睛
希望能读懂它每个心语
让每一个细胞变的透明
让每一丝神经交织于
自然的布局
静心
听，轻轻
轻轻
听
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曲元奇
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| Posted: 2008-10-03 17:42:58 Post subject: |
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| 【吹笛】好第二段真新颖 诗盗兄是借题发挥的能手 |
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拈花微笑
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 03:36:23 Post subject: |
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好笛声呀！好一副佳人秋闺图。由远及近, 很生动... 
嗯，俺再来一杯酒
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拈花微笑
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 03:37:16 Post subject: 盗兄是借题发挥的能手 (zt) |
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| 【吹笛】好第二段真新颖 诗盗兄是借题发挥的能手 |
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 04:05:01 Post subject: 没有能手，只是勇于举手。 |
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| 拈花微笑 wrote: |
| 曲元奇 wrote: |
| 【吹笛】好第二段真新颖 诗盗兄是借题发挥的能手 |
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爱爱
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 10:28:20 Post subject: |
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嗯， 记住了， 要用E调戏寒蝉~~
真用这么高的调么？唱不上去料~~ |
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