敦智
童生
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
Posts: 40
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 Posted: 2008-10-02 21:41:39 Post subject: 七律 无题 |
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四十年华一白丁，打牌声扰读书声。
算无佳丽多青眼，佯作年轻串网名。
暂坐酒吧凭雾绕，斜穿马路笑灯横。
几回梦里登高处，意气由来便远征。
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-10-02 22:05:06 Post subject: |
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| 问好敦智兄！ |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-10-03 06:39:07 Post subject: |
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"几回梦里登高处,意气由来便远征"
志存高远,问好.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
| Posted: 2008-10-03 17:54:36 Post subject: |
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| 敦智兄的诗极具个性，还记得你写过“不做苍天二等龙”，痛快，酣畅！ |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
| Posted: 2008-10-04 03:38:44 Post subject: |
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| 敦智兄，好久不见。问好！望常回来看看。 |
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野航
秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
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| Posted: 2008-10-05 16:19:27 Post subject: |
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好诗好诗，满口余味。
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2008-10-09 10:10:56 Post subject: |
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敦智，倘若串网迎来青眼客，那是人生之大幸!
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