爱爱
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 Posted: 2008-10-03 12:53:00 Post subject: 生活之意象 |
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生活之意象 by 林间青竹
从锅碗瓢盆中抬头
有一丝不易擦觉的微笑
挂在伊月光般光滑的脸庞
清粥小菜
他便轻易被俘落网
在羹汤香浓中投降
于是， 放下碗筷时
伊对镜细细的梳妆
玉耳坠摇晃
折出媚惑的光
凭着一缕幽幽的体香
飞向天堂 |
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詩盜喜裸評
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| Posted: 2008-10-03 14:20:15 Post subject: 总是觉着少了点什么？哈～ |
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好酒一壶！
幽幽的，能换个其他是否更好？
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爱爱
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| Posted: 2008-10-03 15:34:26 Post subject: |
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| 詩盜喜裸評 wrote: |
好酒一壶！
幽幽的，能换个其他是否更好？ |
换成什么好呢， DD你说~~ |
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红袖添乱
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| Posted: 2008-10-03 17:54:05 Post subject: |
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淡淡的体香。。。我建议。
举手表决吧。。同意淡的举手。。我。。！
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拈花微笑
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 03:29:56 Post subject: |
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同意！ 
写得平凡可亲。喜欢。
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詩盜喜裸評
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 04:08:33 Post subject: 没经验～经验不足可以吧？ |
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| 爱爱 wrote: |
| 诗盗喜裸评 wrote: |
好酒一壶！
幽幽的，能换个其他是否更好？ |
换成什么好呢， DD你说~~ |
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爱爱
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 10:24:00 Post subject: |
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你继续装吧~~
我依了袖姐了~ |
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爱爱
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 10:24:52 Post subject: |
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| 红袖添乱 wrote: |
淡淡的体香。。。我建议。
举手表决吧。。同意淡的举手。。我。。！ |
举手， 谢谢袖儿姐姐~ |
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詩盜喜裸評
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| Posted: 2008-10-04 18:08:39 Post subject: 装啥？装酒！装女人香～ |
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| 爱爱 wrote: |
你继续装吧~~
我依了袖姐了~ |
想到一本书：香水。
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