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站在春天的门槛(组诗)
晴宝儿
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PostPosted: 2008-10-03 02:32:39    Post subject: 站在春天的门槛(组诗) Reply with quote

站在春天的门槛(组诗)
文/晴宝儿

■ 亲吻我的墓碑

总有一天
洁白的羽毛会自天降落

就是那一根 擦着我惊恐的身体
升上去 那一天
我用啼哭嘹亮世界
七天的黑暗中
它是唯一的白与柔软
闭着眼 我看到花朵荆棘 流沙脚印
清晰的一条弯曲的路
象天路 通往所有色彩的尽处
七天后母亲的手拨来光亮
羽毛放下重物无声颂念
离我远去

那些重物 象锯齿拉扯一段木
有生之年日夜演奏
我却不敢期待一根羽毛
绽放世间的白 

如若盛开 与墓碑一起
矗立在我直视不能的前方

■ 那些重物

杯光与裙夜舞 
一瓶外文酒一个清洁工一年的薪水
精致的笑沉积在杯底
横看竖看 倒不出清澈

命运的转盘烤红薯的转炉
你可以摇动澳门拉斯维加斯的巨浪
你是否摇得出亲人温暖的眼神

攀爬的脚步虚幻无止境
疲惫的风吹过
这些沉重的包袱呀
走到哪就扔到哪 停止贪恋
冲洗干净还原面目
相挽母亲与爱人的手
把祝福也送给经过的陌生人
世界如此安逸美丽
仿佛刚刚诞生

■ 签名了吗

台风在海浪中高歌
无数朵水花一边吞咽咸涩
一边向阳光眨眼
风托起它们
痕印在沙地的画架
有的热烈 有的欲放
有半片凋残 有凝为一点
海用宽阔呈现一幅幅画
走过生命中的海
你签名了吗
那画 精品或劣品
只要不是赝品 
要么带进墓穴陪葬
与黄金珠宝等列
要么遗弃在或许会长树的海岸
就当没画过

■ 与春天盟誓

当一条路越走越长
当一些词不只以词的形式出现

我终于决定 在北方
给雪花开一个盛大的party
我们唱歌 跳舞 喝酒 点篝火
夜深寒时 久候的桃到场
给与会者每人一件桃衣
摔碎一个碗 与春天盟誓

当一条路越走越长
当一些词不只以词的形式出现

我必须做 把日子归还日子
忘掉季节的暧昧 乍暖 忽冷
与所有的花一起开
开成一个又一个
春天
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-10-03 03:13:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

我必须做 把日子归还日子
忘掉季节的暧昧 乍暖 忽冷
与所有的花一起开
开成一个又一个
春天.....结尾很好.
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PostPosted: 2008-10-03 16:21:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

自由诗.
对人生和生命的彻悟!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-03 17:50:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

那些重物 象锯齿拉扯一段木
有生之年日夜演奏
我却不敢期待一根羽毛
绽放世间的白 
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PostPosted: 2008-10-03 20:11:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

融进生活和哲理,不错!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-03 20:52:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

我必须做 把日子归还日子
忘掉季节的暧昧 乍暖 忽冷
与所有的花一起开
开成一个又一个
春天

颀赏.宝儿长假快乐
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PostPosted: 2008-10-04 05:32:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

闭着眼 我看到花朵荆棘 流沙脚印
清晰的一条弯曲的路
象天路 通往所有色彩的尽处


有生活感悟,节好!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-04 14:41:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

语感不错。
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PostPosted: 2008-11-04 03:50:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位朋友,多多批评,问好大家:)
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