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破阵子.逍遥乐

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2008-09-28 02:26:23 Post subject: 破阵子.逍遥乐

筝底暗香无数，眉中豪气三分。诗酒情怀归羁旅，一段芳心岂落尘？偷闲又几樽。挥袖云来冬夏，敲杯月染晨昏。如梦陶然皆世外，处处玄机处处真，何愁病满身！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2008-09-28 06:28:12 Post subject:

十分精粹的文字,特喜欢"筝底暗香无数,眉中豪气三分"句.既有几分婉约,又有几分豪放. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-09-28 06:50:55 Post subject:

“挥袖云来冬夏，敲杯月染晨昏。” 好句！

冰清
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Posted: 2008-10-03 10:10:17 Post subject:

下笔如神!

菩提子
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Posted: 2008-10-03 18:06:42 Post subject:

好一首既豪情又婉雅之<破阵子-逍遥乐>.

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Posted: 2008-10-08 20:46:44 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

十分精粹的文字,特喜欢"筝底暗香无数,眉中豪气三分"句.既有几分
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感谢老师鼓励.
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Posted: 2008-10-08 20:47:41 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

“挥袖云来冬夏，敲杯月染晨昏。”
好句！

谢谢。
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Posted: 2008-10-08 20:48:17 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

下笔如神!

问好老师.
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Posted: 2008-10-08 20:48:50 Post subject:

菩提子 wrote:

好一首既豪情又婉雅之<破阵子-逍遥乐>.

谢谢鼓励。
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Posted: 2008-10-09 21:05:45 Post subject:

喜欢你的好词。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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