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这一泓伊豆的尤柔

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Posted: 2008-10-01 11:47:03 Post subject: 这一泓伊豆的尤柔

风，递过桂花影摩挲于案前的月光盈时如环肥韵满弯时似燕瘦颦眉晕入此景，可抵小窗冷心静于月，月止于夜躺在墨色里的心事不眠吟哦，流泄于指尖的温婉寒宫袖底的妖娆桂树下执斧的吴刚似我解不开的尤柔我开始寻找寻找昨夜的床边你我的耳语轻呵寻找的如此辛苦，只捡到几片枕孤簟凉的月光 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-10-01 11:47:54 Post subject:

诗盗请你再评，但不准再用那字眼儿。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-10-01 15:06:35 Post subject: 只有一個方法，你來當版主。

無內容 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-10-01 15:27:00 Post subject:

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是说你别再说人家“买弄”。根本没这意思呀。。。
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Posted: 2008-10-01 16:20:50 Post subject: 评妹妹的诗，要评的温柔。我觉得

不能太不符合事实~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-10-01 16:21:05 Post subject: 除了我自己以外，没说过人家卖弄。

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诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

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是说你别再说人家“买弄”。根本没这意思呀。。。

是哦。我知道了。
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Posted: 2008-10-01 16:38:18 Post subject: 9494

失盗说的是 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-10-01 16:52:48 Post subject:

嘿嘿嘿嘿。。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-10-01 16:56:10 Post subject:

其实，我是不想我们别扭着。哪儿有逼着人家评诗的。凡正盗盗该温柔点儿对我，像袖儿那样。。。哦，哦，哦。。。我得安安去了。每人亲一下。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-10-02 11:02:41 Post subject:

貌似有人欺负茉儿了，诗盗兄呢？？还不快点护着妹妹，把那不温柔的给赶走了。。。。。。。。。嘿嘿，在这里我们都是跟着DD混呢，你要护着，宠着，，，，那那那，姐妹们看看还有什么要补充的~~~ 问dd兄好！额继续上班，晚上再来看望你们。

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Posted: 2008-10-02 15:00:52 Post subject: 这样看来，得三餐轮着打！

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貌似有人欺负茉儿了，诗盗兄呢？？还不快点护着妹妹，把那不温柔的给赶走了。。。。。。。。。
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你才会加减来这里转转～
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Posted: 2008-10-03 08:58:57 Post subject:

爱姐姐好。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-10-03 12:31:04 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

爱爱 wrote:

貌似有人欺负茉儿了，诗盗兄呢？？还不快点护着妹妹，把那不温柔的给赶走了。。。。。。。。。
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你才会加减来这里转转～

我虽不常来，但心中常惦记着你们~~

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Posted: 2008-10-03 14:06:31 Post subject: 真能说，里外都做足了！

爱爱 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

爱爱 wrote:

貌似有人欺负茉儿了，诗盗兄呢？？还不快点护着妹妹，把那不温柔的给赶走了。。。。。。。。。
...

你才会加减来这里转转～

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这让我想到那个监视器。。。。左看看。。。右看看。。。
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