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墙上的洞
钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-09-30 02:54:05    Post subject: 墙上的洞 Reply with quote

箭矢疾疾飞旋
发自古漠雕弓
口器嘶嘶有声
来自荒岁的蝗蜂
抑或仓库旮旯
潜逃的锋利丝攻
今夜我的墙上
森森然一个大洞

我半颗心在发麻
痉挛起阵阵秋风
苍茫的月水中
另半颗心在疼痛
青梅的酸气涩味
笼罩着这片草丛
在朦胧西厢上方
竹马正哗啦啦落崩

怪兽张着大口
吞噬着我美梦
茵草芊芊
长满我墓冢
鸣涧翩翩鸟影
霎时了无影踪
我瞪着失血的眼
卧听着暮鼓晨钟

惊悚而起时
阳光的手伸过墙孔
正将过失涂抹修补
轻柔从容
它得意地昂着头颅
相信定能成功
只有我早就知晓
那儿躲着什么蛰虫

08年9月于钓月小筑
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-09-30 04:07:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

一种状态的把握.
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2008-09-30 04:10:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

茵草芊芊
长满我墓冢
我前去吊唁
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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-09-30 17:24:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

只有我早就知晓
那儿躲着什么蛰虫

WOW, 那儿躲着什么蛰虫 Rolling Eyes Confused
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钓月
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PostPosted: 2008-09-30 17:36:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="赵福治"]一种状态的把握.[/quote]

Yes, Sir!
祝赵老师国庆节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-01 04:12:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="韩少君"]茵草芊芊
长满我墓冢
我前去吊唁[/quote]
问好老师! 哈哈!
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PostPosted: 2008-10-01 18:12:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]只有我早就知晓
那儿躲着什么蛰虫

WOW, 那儿躲着什么蛰虫 Rolling Eyes Confused[/quote]

祝你快乐每一天!
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