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秋台夜静思

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Posted: 2008-09-26 22:59:14 Post subject: 秋台夜静思

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Posted: 2008-09-27 08:56:28 Post subject:

哎呀，这是输钱了，还是失恋了？你又不是孙悟空，跳不出五行中噢。。。艾，读不懂的我来安慰一下。。。顺便问问，这时咋的啦？ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-09-27 17:56:05 Post subject: 很浅白呀，咋读不懂？太长了？

苏茉儿 wrote:

哎呀，这是输钱了，还是失恋了？你又不是孙悟空，跳不出五行中噢。。。艾，读不懂的我来安慰一下。。。顺便问问，这时咋的啦？

风雨交加至今，还没停电就是。
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Posted: 2008-09-28 06:53:43 Post subject:

文不对题。不静思会怎样涅～ _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-09-28 15:10:36 Post subject: 会睡觉。

点点儿 wrote:

文不对题。
不静思会怎样涅～

Razz

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Posted: 2008-09-29 08:09:39 Post subject:

嗯，是最后几句不太懂，大概跟个人信仰有关系吧。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-09-29 08:31:45 Post subject:

面壁吧

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Posted: 2008-09-29 18:49:20 Post subject: 虽然我没有宗教信仰。

苏茉儿 wrote:

嗯，是最后几句不太懂，大概跟个人信仰有关系吧。。。

还是解说一下当时情况：那个时候的这个当下，我正指天骂地！如来佛祖从天而降，立马给我一耳刮子！打得我晕头转向，满天星斗，一嘴红丝喷洒～观世音菩萨更是把我画的符咒反丢回来，而且还将鬼画符改成多心经，笑我脑袋空空，一无长物。总结这些破事，神佛仙等，要人类面对自己，不要怨天尤人。完～
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Posted: 2008-09-29 18:51:01 Post subject: 活菩萨！！

悠子 wrote:

面壁吧

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Posted: 2008-09-30 05:31:12 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

苏茉儿 wrote:

嗯，是最后几句不太懂，大概跟个人信仰有关系吧。。。

还是解说一下当时情况：那个时候的这个当下，我正指天骂地！如来佛祖从天而降，立马给我一耳刮子！打得我晕头转向，满天星斗，一嘴红丝喷洒～观世音菩萨更是把我画的符咒反丢回来，而且还将鬼画符改成多心经，笑我脑袋空空，一无长物。总结这些破事，神佛仙等，要人类面对自己，不要怨天尤人。完～

懂了，有情绪呢。。。哈！
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Posted: 2009-06-15 04:21:42 Post subject:

硬來套用李白名詩題'夜靜思'名,完來全無關係. 悟道不似,似靜思己過吧..只有"空不尽秋台呼啸"近似. _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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Posted: 2009-06-15 04:54:10 Post subject: 谢谢您的指教！这三个字是跟李白租的，其实该叫做秋台夜牢骚。

sfiawong wrote:

硬来套用李白名诗题'夜静思'名,完来全无关系.
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Posted: 2009-06-15 05:19:32 Post subject: 该有情绪的时候，总是不会忘记。

苏茉儿 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

苏茉儿 wrote:

嗯，是最后几句不太懂，大概跟个人信仰有关系吧。。。

懂了，有情绪呢。。。哈！

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Posted: 2010-09-18 11:54:07 Post subject:

没想到诗盗也有个“秋台夜静思”。中秋节快到了，问诗盗好。江月年年初照人啦 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2010-09-18 20:34:22 Post subject: 正好台风来，标准的秋台。

上城 wrote:

没想到诗盗也有个“秋台夜静思”。中秋节快到了，问诗盗好。江月年年初照人啦

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