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怀念阿海
爱月
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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 02:15:40    Post subject: 怀念阿海 Reply with quote

怀念阿海


/爱月





当我走进乌黑的夜里
夜风总为我们哭泣
我想你的时候,背叛诅咒的声音
阿海,这夜云依然走着
他飘向另一个归处
而我不在此处——





阿海,原谅沙浪任性
原谅荒唐的梦境
原谅一些人怀着柔软的坏心眼
还要原谅被爱灼伤的疲惫
也原谅某一刻
世界变的异类





阿海,请微笑着注视这里
天堂的路很宽敞,挤着各种颜色的人
我们把自己倒着悬挂
为做逃犯的鱼选美
做个小心翼翼的人





阿海,夜风吹起暮色的美
深深浅浅的脚印被掩埋
很多人看不见
被踩进盐和沙砾
我们怀念着最小的自己
海的背面,升腾淡蓝色的诗眼
海妹妹存活下来——




2008/9/26
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 03:04:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

怀念过去的岁月.
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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 21:26:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

真切感人的诉说。而且保持简练不琐碎,很好。欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-27 19:44:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
怀念过去的岁月.
问候,谢赵兄的阅读,提前祝节日愉快!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-27 19:45:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
真切感人的诉说。而且保持简练不琐碎,很好。欣赏。
谢谢您的评论给予的鼓励,问候秋天快乐!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-09-28 01:05:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们把自己倒着悬挂
为做逃犯的鱼选美
做个小心翼翼的人


同意NY的,很喜欢这样的句子~问好爱月,节日快乐!
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2008-09-28 01:59:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

我们把自己倒着悬挂
为做逃犯的鱼选美
做个小心翼翼的人


不错,很欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-28 19:02:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

真情感人
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