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堕落者
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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 04:38:19    Post subject: 堕落者 Reply with quote

堕落者

我的铁子Mister张
向来很少走出小镇
最早网络起自己的群体
于是,五湖四海的QQ女人
纷至沓来我们的家乡

他是非党“群众”
(还够不上党外人士)
人很猥琐,心很肮脏
钱是赚得绝对干净

他开店、对缝、给作文班讲课
甚至抽空卸一两次火车

他用自己的辛苦钱
为开放(包括淫荡)的女人洗澡
他喝醉了,就说
我一生的任务
就是要让更多的男人
当王八

我戴眼镜的Mister张气死你
让你成为性感世界
愤怒的旁观者

那个被众男毙命街头的人
就是我的铁子
戴眼镜的Mister张

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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 14:14:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

五湖四海的QQ女人
纷至沓来我们的家乡

很有性格的诗。
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东北花大姐儿
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PostPosted: 2008-09-27 14:11:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢 nobody 先生!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-28 01:13:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

一副自甘堕落画像~
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东北花大姐儿
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PostPosted: 2008-09-29 01:16:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

堕落实为无奈

关键是 他从堕落中启示我们

能否从无奈中提炼出 抗拒的精神元素

堕落往往是真行为 假愿望

真愿望有时也被迫堕落

让我们宽容生活方式的自由并破解堕落之谜
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