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来来来，逛大街

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Posted: 2008-09-22 14:29:50 Post subject: 来来来，逛大街

逛大街 [编辑] [删除] [引用] 城市高楼车流人动性感的高跟儿裸露陪门庭落雀的主人等待不仅被欣赏更为被买走每个路口都是单行每个投币的车位都已经被占用每个红灯都早早的停每个绿灯都短暂的要命无家可归的人躺在狭窄的路宅旁街头小贩热闹的经营着热狗炸薯片抬头不见顶的摩天高楼把川流的车辆挤成沿街的热狗繁忙，打上每张行色匆匆的脸悠闲，撕下粗衣人贫困的面纱巨大的噪音，在内心中播种着异样的平静如果你善于迷路，这样逛一逛还是很消耗热量的 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-09-22 14:37:05 Post subject:

好，什么时候我们一起逛呀。。。迷路好有个伴~

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Posted: 2008-09-22 14:56:08 Post subject:

[编辑] [删除] [引用] 這三失靈。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-22 15:14:52 Post subject:

如果你善于迷路，这样逛一逛还是很消耗热量的这一句简直是神来之笔.问好逛街要找个美女一起逛,不然更消耗热量 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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Posted: 2008-09-22 16:27:54 Post subject:

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好，什么时候我们一起逛呀。。。

迷路好有个伴~

偶特能逛，你可要跟得上。。。嘻～～～
偶特别为你准备个小滑板好啦：～ Razz

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Posted: 2008-09-22 16:29:35 Post subject:

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[编辑] [删除] [引用] 這三失靈。

骨头里挑鸡蛋呀您哪～

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Posted: 2008-09-22 16:31:07 Post subject:

伤城 wrote:

如果你善于迷路，这样逛一逛还是很消耗热量的
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跟美女您还有心思逛得下去嘛～嘻。。。 Embarassed

问好，伤城不伤～
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Posted: 2008-09-22 16:45:39 Post subject:

不想去 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-22 17:04:02 Post subject: 呵，你怎知我不能哪？(哇，较劲呢)

点点儿 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

好，什么时候我们一起逛呀。。。

迷路好有个伴~

偶特能逛，你可要跟得上。。。嘻～～～
...

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Posted: 2008-09-22 17:04:34 Post subject: 你干嘛不来

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不想去

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Posted: 2008-09-22 17:13:29 Post subject: 诊断

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不想去

失恋～

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Posted: 2008-09-22 17:15:41 Post subject: 哈，难怪呢，发懒~

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悠子 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

不想去

失恋～

嘻 Embarassed

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Posted: 2008-09-22 17:50:07 Post subject: 診斷：非失戀，或稱假性失戀。因為增了三斤肉～

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悠子 wrote:

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不想去

失恋～

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Posted: 2008-09-22 19:53:52 Post subject: 你们乘我不在编排我~~~

人家在沉思嘛！大脑动的时候，人就特懒~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-22 20:59:12 Post subject: 實在不應該乘你不在時编排你。

红袖添乱 wrote:

人家在沉思嘛！
大脑动的时候，人就特懒~~

應該看看有甚麼可以順的～
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Posted: 2008-09-23 14:53:25 Post subject:

一起失恋吧。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-09-23 16:04:20 Post subject: 有没有发现，版面上看不到那三！！

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[编辑] [删除] [引用] 这三失灵。

骨头里挑鸡蛋呀您哪～
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Posted: 2008-09-23 16:22:44 Post subject: 一起失戀！怪怪的～

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一起失恋吧。。

假設AB是一對情侶，在某時某地分手，算是一起失戀呢～
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