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叛徒

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Posted: 2008-09-20 18:30:45 Post subject: 叛徒

叛徒 ——献给鲁迅先生一柄匕首闪闪的穿黑魆魆的大夜凛凛前行所有的星星皆醒而惊呼： ——谋杀！鲁迅的头，在两株他家的枣树下葫芦一样的冷漠四周的空气荡漾着毛发烧焦的气味它独自思索那美丽的女吊灵魂对肉体说：我要马上脱壳，趁着夜色和酣睡于是，腔子里喷出血来一泓肺结核杆菌中国烟花一样美丽鲁迅死了农妇依然持瓢舀水煮饭农妇的丈夫是读书人虽然有知识分子一般的瘦骨嶙峋但没有染结核杆菌 2008-9-21 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-09-20 23:47:44 Post subject:

形象、深刻、独特，有阅读感染力。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-21 06:47:56 Post subject:

虽然有知识分子一般的瘦骨嶙峋但没有染结核杆菌哈, 绝

nobody
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Posted: 2008-09-21 16:26:00 Post subject:

来欣赏学习下，并问好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-21 21:41:37 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

形象、深刻、独特，有阅读感染力。

问好道模。
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Posted: 2008-09-21 21:43:34 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

虽然有知识分子一般的瘦骨嶙峋
但没有染结核杆菌

哈, 绝 Very Happy

问好白水。今天的知识分子缺少鲁迅先生的反叛精神，如今都是膝盖发软的一族。
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Posted: 2008-09-21 21:45:08 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

来欣赏学习下，并问好。

问好梅弟，久未谋面了，甚念。
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金金
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Posted: 2008-09-22 01:33:09 Post subject:

我喜欢最后一段，很好玩！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-09-22 22:54:26 Post subject:

字里行间鲁迅风骨

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-24 05:22:26 Post subject:

问好金金和元奇。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

山城子
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Posted: 2008-09-25 16:55:33 Post subject:

金金 wrote:

我喜欢最后一段，很有力度！

很有力度！

爱月
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Posted: 2008-09-26 02:18:00 Post subject:

深刻，刀光剑影，有血气。 _________________ 诗歌、诗剧。以文会友。http://blog.sina.com.cn/juneraiyue112

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-09-28 01:19:44 Post subject:

呵呵，他们都把好的说完了,我就欣赏吧! 很硬朗的诗风,节日快乐!

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-28 01:57:18 Post subject:

问好双月和山城子。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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