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PostPosted: 2008-09-20 18:30:45    Post subject: 叛徒 Reply with quote

叛徒
——献给鲁迅先生

一柄匕首
闪闪的
穿黑魆魆的大夜凛凛前行
所有的星星皆醒而惊呼:
——谋杀!

鲁迅的头,在两株他家的枣树下
葫芦一样的冷漠
四周的空气荡漾着毛发烧焦的气味
它独自思索
那美丽的女吊

灵魂对肉体说:
我要马上脱壳,趁着夜色和酣睡
于是,腔子里喷出血来
一泓肺结核杆菌
中国烟花一样美丽

鲁迅死了
农妇依然持瓢舀水煮饭
农妇的丈夫是读书人
虽然有知识分子一般的瘦骨嶙峋
但没有染结核杆菌
2008-9-21
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2008-09-20 23:47:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象、深刻、独特,有阅读感染力。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-21 06:47:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

虽然有知识分子一般的瘦骨嶙峋
但没有染结核杆菌

哈, 绝 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-09-21 16:26:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

来欣赏学习下,并问好。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-21 21:41:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

William Zhou周道模 wrote:
形象、深刻、独特,有阅读感染力。

问好道模。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-21 21:43:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
虽然有知识分子一般的瘦骨嶙峋
但没有染结核杆菌

哈, 绝 Very Happy

问好白水。今天的知识分子缺少鲁迅先生的反叛精神,如今都是膝盖发软的一族。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-21 21:45:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

nobody wrote:
来欣赏学习下,并问好。

问好梅弟,久未谋面了,甚念。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-22 01:33:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

我喜欢最后一段,很好玩!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-22 22:54:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

字里行间鲁迅风骨
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PostPosted: 2008-09-24 05:22:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好金金和元奇。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-25 16:55:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
我喜欢最后一段,很有力度!



很有力度!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-26 02:18:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

深刻,刀光剑影,有血气。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-28 01:19:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,他们都把好的说完了,我就欣赏吧!

很硬朗的诗风,节日快乐!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-28 01:57:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好双月和山城子。
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