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【叹月】（五绝）

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Posted: 2008-09-21 01:25:32 Post subject: 【叹月】（五绝）

叹月（五绝）我有相思满，月无怜恤心。才闻东有女，无那已他人。 2008。09 。20 _________________ 陪情感在哲理中流淌——

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Posted: 2008-09-21 05:36:46 Post subject:

冷月无心,叹月伤情. "满"字恐为"泪"字之误. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2008-09-22 01:37:42 Post subject: [叹月]

谢谢指点，但这首小诗是“满”字，并未打错，因是绝句，原不要求对仗，故觉得“满”字意味会更好些，不知您有何指教？？ _________________ 陪情感在哲理中流淌——

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