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漂泊的渡口

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:07:25 Post subject:

如花春娇~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:08:58 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

如花春娇~~~

啊，春娇，我的妈，我服了。。。
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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:12:24 Post subject:

是不是吗？我觉得是叫那个名字~~啥的 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:15:48 Post subject:

嗯，再该该，，， _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:23:47 Post subject:

我是说，再改改，怎么老敲错字。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:32:28 Post subject:

应该就拿这个作品练练转韵。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:48:23 Post subject:

哈，我算交作业了吗。好看

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:49:30 Post subject: 呓，被打倒两次，还不躺着

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

应该就拿这个作品练练转韵。

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Posted: 2008-09-17 12:59:27 Post subject:

你是不系之舟，我只好是漂泊的渡口。行过烟波万里的清愁，漂泊亦风流。你想不想停留？山上袅袅炊烟招手，层层枫林红透，孤峰落霞正温柔。。。。。你愿不愿回首？岁月流走了多少守候？秋江终有尽头，沉浮望断行舟。可你仍在浪漫地游，我依然恋恋地走。。。在你疲倦入睡之前，我是秋风中漂泊的渡口。 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-17 13:02:56 Post subject: 不成！非练练不可，倒了躺着也得练。

悠子 wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

应该就拿这个作品练练转韵。

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Posted: 2008-09-17 19:28:01 Post subject:

也照着你的样子，画了一个。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-09-17 22:26:04 Post subject:

三个【渡口】把好诗都渡到落尘来了

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Posted: 2008-09-21 17:05:44 Post subject:

漂泊亦风流... _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-09-22 15:17:52 Post subject:

漂泊的渡口 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

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