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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 12:56:05    Post subject: 这不是沿着你的思路走么？ Reply with quote
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一树迎风舞，新月上枝头。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 13:06:42    Post subject: 我哪里有一树迎风舞，新月上枝头? Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 13:08:00    Post subject: 喝酒了没? Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 13:19:15    Post subject: 都用你的多不好意思～提供一些则个。 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 13:21:41    Post subject: 小店不让赊，没买成。 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 13:28:34    Post subject: 那也不能换色呀 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 13:31:38    Post subject: 小店早打烊了，看你正迷糊着呢 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 14:11:34    Post subject: 我不是会写不韵的诗吗~~~ Reply with quote
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韻S了，有些積重難返， 以後不寫這樣的詩了！！不對，你要學著轉韻，或是讓音韻協調。讓音韻從有形化為無形。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 15:02:14    Post subject: 那就可以做到有韵似无韵，何必一定要一刀切。 Reply with quote
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韵S了，有些积重难返， 以后不写这样的诗了！！不对，你要学着转韵，或是让音韵协调。让音韵从有形化为无形。

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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 15:18:28    Post subject: 不是说积重难返了吗？ 好像脱不出来似的，调调不一样~ 不过你不是要练习吗 Reply with quote
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韵S了，有些积重难返， 以后不写这样的诗了！！不对，你要学着转韵，或是让音韵协调。让音韵从有形化为无形。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 15:33:10    Post subject: 一起练练啊，练习有练习的乐趣。 Reply with quote
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韵S了，有些积重难返， 以后不写这样的诗了！！不对，你要学着转韵，或是让音韵协调。让音韵从有形化为无形。

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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 19:25:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
想想那渡口，还真有诱惑。楼上凑和了一个。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 21:53:35    Post subject: 这才看到！换啥色啊？不懂～ Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-17 22:07:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
【斑痕镶嵌的故事沉默在暗铜色后】
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PostPosted: 2008-09-18 07:14:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
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三十九渡口，有特殊的意思吧？好象袖子那小酒管的地址。。。：）
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PostPosted: 2008-09-18 09:44:17    Post subject: 向曲兄求一首渡口，想看看曲兄何以为之。 Reply with quote
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【斑痕镶嵌的故事沉默在暗铜色后】

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PostPosted: 2008-09-18 09:45:08    Post subject: 不是谁说要加个39的？ Reply with quote
苏茉儿 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
一树迎风舞，新月上枝头。
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三十九渡口，有特殊的意思吧？好象袖子那小酒管的地址。。。：）


分开的两联其实是残片，看着还适用，就搁着了。舍不得丢～
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