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《故乡》一组
沙漠
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PostPosted: 2008-09-11 04:35:16    Post subject: 《故乡》一组 Reply with quote

《故乡》一组

《故乡》

祖屋对面的山冈
寒意中刮起一波波麦浪
翠色的,寂静,空旷
总在回眸时分
生出惆怅
羸弱的时光,母亲弯下腰
拔一茬年轻的岁月
煮成腾腾的热气,盖上暗色的头巾
不再冻伤的双足
总被我用来远离


《又见炊烟》

向西千里,袅袅炊烟里
儿时的脚印,爬上第一缕晨曦
家园的面容,就像水中倒影
越静越清晰
爷爷的砍柴刀,倚在老屋的门后
歪歪扭扭的日子,积成厚重的锈迹
而内心的光芒与握刀的姿势
已被世代传袭


《轨迹》

家是圆心
工作是半径

母亲是圆心
翅膀是半径

故乡是圆心
思念是半径

总觉得
半径越长
亏欠越多


《云上的日子》

奔跑的石头,在你身后吆喝
你逃入一片翠竹林
沾濡湿气的碎花衣裳
抽出嫩嫩的竹尖
一路摇动青草的香
拥挤的日子,被麦芒追赶
你总是透过静静的水面
笑看云天


《枯萎的花》

不忍看你沧桑的眼睛
姐姐!我忍住这一声呼喊
多少年,你折射的美丽
装满我小小的心灵
我们的小网兜,兜着铅笔和课本
落出的字,都长成了地里的菜苗
多少花儿云一样飘过
那一天,你说要长到一棵遒劲的树上
潘多拉的魔盒,收走了它的根须
一块冷硬的光阴砸下
我知道你疼,姐姐!

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PostPosted: 2008-09-12 02:54:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言太平,缺少张力。
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-09-12 03:02:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

故乡是圆心
思念是半径
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PostPosted: 2008-09-13 05:22:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好两位.中秋快乐!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-09-14 01:51:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

总觉得
半径越长
亏欠越多

问好沙漠,中秋快乐!
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