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七绝 题《负薪老母》图
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PostPosted: 2008-09-13 17:32:55    Post subject: 七绝 题《负薪老母》图 Reply with quote


竹杖且扶一径长,柴薪有赖满林苍。
谁知山深秋寒重?瘦骨风凋发染霜。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-09-14 16:16:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

形象传神,诗画相得益彰.

"斑白者,不负载于道路"的理想社会尚有距离啊!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-15 14:59:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗句简洁传神,喜欢。
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统
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PostPosted: 2008-09-15 15:04:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

写得传神,欣赏.
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PostPosted: 2008-09-15 15:35:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

有杜工部写草民悲苦之风。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-15 16:18:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢各位朋友评赏!欢迎和作。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-16 14:41:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

草和一首:

竹杖何堪路径长

残年余力面苍苍

乳孙哭叫茅棚内

背负薪柴为却霜
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PostPosted: 2008-09-18 04:46:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢和诗!欣赏收藏!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-20 20:31:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

瘦骨风凋,好诗~
竹杖何堪,佳句~
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