bannong 童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007 Posts: 44
bannongCollection |
Posted: 2008-09-13 17:32:55 Post subject: 七绝 题《负薪老母》图 |
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竹杖且扶一径长,柴薪有赖满林苍。
谁知山深秋寒重?瘦骨风凋发染霜。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-14 16:16:25 Post subject: |
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形象传神,诗画相得益彰.
"斑白者,不负载于道路"的理想社会尚有距离啊! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-15 14:59:45 Post subject: |
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诗句简洁传神,喜欢。 _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-15 15:04:19 Post subject: |
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写得传神,欣赏. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2008-09-15 15:35:49 Post subject: |
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有杜工部写草民悲苦之风。 |
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bannong 童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007 Posts: 44
bannongCollection |
Posted: 2008-09-15 16:18:44 Post subject: |
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多谢各位朋友评赏!欢迎和作。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-16 14:41:45 Post subject: |
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草和一首:
竹杖何堪路径长
残年余力面苍苍
乳孙哭叫茅棚内
背负薪柴为却霜 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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bannong 童生
Joined: 16 Jul 2007 Posts: 44
bannongCollection |
Posted: 2008-09-18 04:46:34 Post subject: |
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多谢和诗!欣赏收藏! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2008-09-20 20:31:23 Post subject: |
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瘦骨风凋,好诗~
竹杖何堪,佳句~ |
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