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写在红叶之前

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Posted: 2008-09-07 16:30:13 Post subject: 写在红叶之前

最纯最净的温暖，是否在春天之后？不必去赶流光溢彩，也不必在意收获。我只想悉心去了解一片叶的内涵。抵御夏的热，抵御秋的凉。小小叶脉，收敛在花香或浓或淡的日子。几场委婉的风，几场月光的雨，抖落前世的梦，你不再青翠欲滴的呼吸。是不是还在等待向秋起草一段比生命辽阔的对白？秋天，因你溢满一个梦幻燃烧的期待。 09/07/2008

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Posted: 2008-09-07 17:51:35 Post subject:

应该从冬起秋收，哈～会不会要求太多？别理我！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-09-07 18:20:33 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

应该从冬起秋收，哈～会不会要求太多？别理我！

诗盗这次有理。写冬其实球会更有几分霜寒。

但已经很好了。诗盗太严格了。 Rolling Eyes

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而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-08 04:16:05 Post subject: 要求太多，太罗嗦

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

应该从冬起秋收，哈～会不会要求太多？别理我！

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Posted: 2008-09-08 04:17:23 Post subject: 袖袖跟着起哄吧~

红袖添乱 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

应该从冬起秋收，哈～会不会要求太多？别理我！

诗盗这次有理。写冬其实球会更有几分霜寒。
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Posted: 2008-09-08 04:19:02 Post subject:

哈，这散文诗？属于短缺型~

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Posted: 2008-09-08 11:35:52 Post subject:

嗯，立等看写在红叶之后 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-09-08 14:28:09 Post subject: 我与红叶相约来年在XX PIER不见不散~

拈花微笑 wrote:

嗯，立等看写在红叶之后 Smile

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Posted: 2008-09-08 14:47:38 Post subject: 真哪？可见平常要求太少。

悠子 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

應該從冬起秋收，哈～會不會要求太多？別理我！

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Posted: 2008-09-08 14:52:38 Post subject: 红叶不会去的，刚刚打电话问过。

悠子 wrote:

拈花微笑 wrote:

嗯，立等看寫在紅葉之後 Smile

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Posted: 2008-09-08 16:39:02 Post subject: 你，捣乱，和红叶说什么了?

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

拈花微笑 wrote:

嗯，立等看寫在紅葉之後 Smile

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Posted: 2008-09-08 18:43:33 Post subject: 我执红叶前往~~~

好不好嘛~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-09-08 20:46:06 Post subject:

壮美的红叶在秋天里让时光伤感得默默地叹息如飘落的音符不敢发出心底的声音 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-09-09 05:45:00 Post subject: 原计划就是这样的

红袖添乱 wrote:

好不好嘛~~

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