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苍烟
仝莓
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PostPosted: 2007-02-08 02:52:10    Post subject: 苍烟 Reply with quote

世上不被注意的,不是
手中的空杯子,不是
古祠门前午后的阳光
和那些族谱上旧的名字
排行的世袭,那些引以为常
塔影下妖怪蠢蠢欲动的神话

不是我这时斟酒的心情,不是
空杯子的回响,有些恍惚
旧瓦屋上的泥尘,野草
左顾右盼,开白色的花
不是那种不吉祥的颜色
掠过我还有些残红的脸

我要排遣这些不是,不是
手中的空杯子能装下
空是一个很大的词,不是
那种没有的空,塞满什么东西的空
不是我装了五十年也没有装满的空
不是,完全不是
我想用的那种比喻不能说清

有时我觉得似乎是这样一种味道
沿渔塘溪畔的散步
白荻袅袅的紫花
有时就是一抹惊起的的鸟烟
在你回过神来时,仍然不是
也许是早晨,也许是黄昏
也许是你突然感觉到的阵阵萤火
构成的某一片记忆中的苍烟
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月光情怀
秀才


Joined: 09 Jan 2007
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Location: 陕西·西安
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PostPosted: 2007-02-08 04:33:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

一首看似饱满饱满,又很“空”的诗。问好。
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-02-08 07:54:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

仝莓玩起文字来娴熟自如呀
很有弹性的
Very Happy
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三色堇
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PostPosted: 2007-02-09 05:30:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

过于满了反而是一种伤害.......
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