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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 11:51:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
喝酒，喝酒... Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 13:41:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
哈，全是砸砖滴呀～
偶来拣砖－－－盖新房喽～～～ Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 14:45:50    Post subject: 我都收起来了，准备盖酒楼 Reply with quote
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哈，全是砸砖滴呀～
偶来拣砖－－－盖新房喽～～～ Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 16:08:27    Post subject: 还以为你没注意，想想就算了。 Reply with quote
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用悠子的文字寫的東東呢

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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 16:56:05    Post subject: 我注意了，你就不能算了 Reply with quote
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用悠子的文字寫的東東呢
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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 16:59:29    Post subject: 小二， 上扬州大曲 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 19:03:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
交差！

初见青花瓷，觉得其韵并不协调。当然，商业作为多听几回也就顺了。
这次试作只做第一段，但求能唱，运用悠子原有字义做些调整。至于合曲，许多连音处，用字作了简化。小小实验，尽量批评。


细雨蒙烟这江南，迷幻浪漫。怎勘别离受伤，成泪痕斑斑
杨柳依依随风舞，失落的飘逸。一转眼曲终人也散

细雨蒙烟的江南，风轻云淡。而我细心的呵护，愿代代相传
风一般流言不断，尝尽有缘无缘的冷暖

相思化千万缕，寂寞在心底。浪漫随风飘逸，失落成痕迹
轻掀起尘封的孤寂，演绎那一出一出传奇

相思化千万缕，寂寞在心底。浪漫随风飘逸，失落成痕迹
轻掀起尘封的孤寂，我心在那里
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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 04:20:35    Post subject: 想尽办法赶走客人是这里的特色。 Reply with quote
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不好，怎看都不好。

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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 04:34:01    Post subject: 重写。不悠子也不青花瓷。 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 04:35:01    Post subject: 空尘计？ Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 06:27:44    Post subject: 哈～啊！ Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 06:28:20    Post subject: 你先！ Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-03 06:35:49    Post subject: 希望可以盖酒食楼。 Reply with quote
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