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徐娘，早已不再半老

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白水
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Posted: 2008-08-31 08:59:31 Post subject: 徐娘，早已不再半老

徐娘，早已不再半老四十的你虽已徐娘不再，却风韵依然爬出秋墙的半树红杏勾引着我浅寐未央的思绪后庭那泓秋水是你蓝色的明眸融我于你，昼之梦幻庆宏唤我“醒醒，看看邻家晓松，还有明日飘零的秋叶… …” 我知秋风秋风就要冷了轻轻如我, 如我犹疑的手牵你飘逸的裙裾不舍依依依依不舍的我操生涩英语,喃喃的说: “徐娘, 你若半老定是我命中情人” 注:典故徐娘半老实际年龄为26岁左右.

hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-08-31 09:48:09 Post subject:

感叹春花秋月 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-08-31 14:09:28 Post subject:

众里寻她千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在，灯火阑珊处。

白水
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Posted: 2008-08-31 14:31:44 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

感叹春花秋月

不是了, 庆红他们最明白 Very Happy

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2008-08-31 14:56:39 Post subject:

人生况叹生命情味都化在景物和动态中了。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-08-31 17:18:03 Post subject:

写得别有味道和情趣.

白水
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Posted: 2008-08-31 17:19:43 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

众里寻她千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在，灯火阑珊处。

哈, 等你们帮白大帅哥找, 找到了让"她"陪我们饮茶论诗, 问好 Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-08-31 17:22:38 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

人生况叹生命情味都化在景物和动态中了。

还有我们诗友的名字

白水
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Posted: 2008-08-31 17:38:20 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

写得别有味道和情趣.

看出来了? 此诗一方面是记录我近来寻"她"的真实感触, 另一方面也是感谢几位诗友帮我寻"她",给我们许多帮助, 写首诗歌祝大家周末哈哈一乐 Very Happy

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Posted: 2008-09-02 14:32:59 Post subject:

待嫁徐娘街巷深处，待嫁徐娘。几番精心打扮，难掩岁月沧桑。翘首以待，朝思暮想。寻寻觅觅，凄凄惶惶。几时盼来，入赘新郎？

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Posted: 2008-09-02 19:14:08 Post subject:

大家别上当，白水的徐娘，是几片曾经爱过又抛弃了的未成交的拿不定主意的...的半老的秦砖汉瓦

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Posted: 2008-09-03 00:16:07 Post subject:

语言生动,有趣,问好白水! _________________ 悠游的世界,美梦何其多? http://blog.sina.com.cn/wangyourong

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Posted: 2008-09-03 14:25:12 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

大家别上当，白水的徐娘，是几片曾经爱过又抛弃了的未成交的拿不定主意的...的半老的秦砖汉瓦 Very Happy

白水兄是：
“寻来片瓦对寒风。”
找对象不容易。只是恋爱未成，算不上“始乱终弃”。
Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-04 17:32:53 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

待嫁徐娘

街巷深处，
待嫁徐娘。
几番精心打扮，
难掩岁月沧桑。
翘首以待，
朝思暮想。
寻寻觅觅，
凄凄惶惶。
几时盼来，
入赘新郎？

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哈, 庆宏, 你诗歌的内涵比我的那首可深多了, 我的只写出人们购物挑剔的复杂心理.而你却把北美经济萧条后市场疲软刻画的入木三分. 不愧大博士, 学习了. Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-04 17:34:59 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

大家别上当，白水的徐娘，是几片曾经爱过又抛弃了的未成交的拿不定主意的...的半老的秦砖汉瓦 Very Happy

秋叶, 还得感谢嫂子的提醒. 她可谓是专家了, 这首诗歌也是因她一句话而起. 代问她好. Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-04 17:36:23 Post subject:

汪有榕 wrote:

语言生动,有趣,问好白水!

很喜欢你的诗歌, 问好.

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-04 17:44:23 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

大家别上当，白水的徐娘，是几片曾经爱过又抛弃了的未成交的拿不定主意的...的半老的秦砖汉瓦 Very Happy

白水兄是：
“寻来片瓦对寒风。”
找对象不容易。只是恋爱未成，算不上“始乱终弃”。

...

你真能逗乐, 真要被你们笑晕. 其实我们挺义气的, 不是吗 Very Happy

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-09-05 05:22:56 Post subject:

后庭那泓秋水是你蓝色的明眸融我于你，昼之梦幻 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

秀水
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Posted: 2008-09-05 17:52:06 Post subject:

依依不舍的我操生涩英语,喃喃的说: “徐娘, 你若半老定是我命中情人” 有味.颀赏 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

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Posted: 2008-09-11 16:23:38 Post subject:

很有趣、勾魂的小诗，问好。

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