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PostPosted: 2008-08-29 17:39:20    Post subject: 青花词 Reply with quote
细雨蒙烟的江南锁定碧瑶青簪
淡描缩水的柔情收敛了饱蘸情墨的浪漫
用半世的冷暖去了悟你曾经的风华绝代
别离时埋伏的疼痛复诉桃花凋谢成泪痕斑斑
情思一缕飘散

冲动的跋涉千里只为印证曲终人散的寂然
一寸的袅娜怎样企图万年的海枯石烂
杨柳依依随风欲与蝶翩跹共舞失落的飘逸
袅袅炊烟在清霜覆盖的晚秋诱惑受伤的情感
心对心寂寞交谈

你一笑的嫣然如色白花青纤尘不染
我平静的心湖解读多少城市霓虹华丽的情幻
又绿的江南，胭脂粉红迷离在淡淡白雾漂浮

08/29/2008
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PostPosted: 2008-08-29 18:51:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
坐个沙发。 有点疼痛有点情空， 几分怅然几分恍如梦
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PostPosted: 2008-08-30 04:59:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
不好，怎看都不好。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-30 13:55:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要提出具体意见。
公鸡是要被杀掉的。咔咔！
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PostPosted: 2008-08-30 13:56:22    Post subject: 而且，不敢跟了，本来都想着写了。。。 Reply with quote
红袖添乱 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要说不好就要提出具体意见。

...

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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 03:04:38    Post subject: 旧曲新词对于悠子应该没有必要。 Reply with quote
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要么能见其长，否则就会曝其短，何苦来哉！

这样的方式最怕就是（凑），若能不凑又不去对字数再能别出心裁，方可说上乘。花那些心力何必？创作不如。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 11:09:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要么能见其长，否则就会曝其短，何苦来哉！
...


我想凑还凑不出那。。。咋我就觉得很好呀。你欺负人。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 14:55:19    Post subject: 你才是色道道，性别排挤。 Reply with quote
蘇茉兒 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要麼能見其長，否則就會曝其短，何苦來哉！
...


我想湊還湊不出那。。。咋我就覺得很好呀。你欺負人。。。


有空我用悠子的文字试作看看，具体一下说明。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 15:43:12    Post subject: 我拿杯咖啡来 Reply with quote
红袖添乱 wrote:
坐个沙发。 有点疼痛有点情空， 几分怅然几分恍如梦
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 15:43:58    Post subject: 小二，上酒~~~~ Reply with quote
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不好，怎看都不好。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 15:45:11    Post subject: 哪是我的文字啦？ 我拿醒酒汤来 Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
蘇茉兒 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要麼能見其長，否則就會曝其短，何苦來哉！
...


我想湊還湊不出那。。。咋我就覺得很好呀。你欺負人。。。


有空我用悠子的文字试作看看，具体一下说明。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 15:49:12    Post subject: 第一句说的不对，后面都对 Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要么能见其长，否则就会曝其短，何苦来哉！
...
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 15:49:51    Post subject: 排挤你是你的荣幸哪~ Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
蘇茉兒 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要麼能見其長，否則就會曝其短，何苦來哉！
...


我想湊還湊不出那。。。咋我就覺得很好呀。你欺負人。。。


有空我用悠子的文字试作看看，具体一下说明。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 22:08:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
一诗【石】激起千层浪
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 03:11:19    Post subject: 好欺负的才要欺负啊！对不对～ Reply with quote
悠子 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要麼能見其長，否則就會曝其短，何苦來哉！
...

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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 07:34:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要麼能見其長，否則就會曝其短，何苦來哉！
...


你说，不欺负你，欺负谁。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 16:23:12    Post subject: 可以见得，我本善良。 Reply with quote
蘇茉兒 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
紅袖添亂 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
不好，怎看都不好。


要說不好就要提出具體意見。

...


要麼能見其長，否則就會曝其短，何苦來哉！
...


你說，不欺負你，欺負誰。。。

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PostPosted: 2008-09-01 16:25:39    Post subject: 唉呀！都忘了我是这里唯一的小二，怠慢了。 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 11:01:25    Post subject: 客人早走了 Reply with quote
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悠子 wrote:
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PostPosted: 2008-09-02 11:02:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
用悠子的文字写的东东呢
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