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井
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PostPosted: 2008-08-28 17:25:51    Post subject: 井 Reply with quote
我一直说，挖
凿穿欲望的底线
流淌生命的水源
在沉默的大地上
灌溉喧嚣的人间

斗转星移
在一个风清月朗的夜晚
趴伏于高高的井沿
将脸贴向故乡
春风度过了玉门关
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PostPosted: 2008-08-28 22:15:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
将脸贴向故乡
春风度过了玉门关
..............喜欢最后一节.
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PostPosted: 2008-08-29 17:44:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
通篇未写自然的人工挖的“井”，构思有新意。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-30 05:04:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
赵福治 wrote:
将脸贴向故乡
春风度过了玉门关
..............喜欢最后一节.


问好福治！
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PostPosted: 2008-08-30 05:05:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
William Zhou周道模 wrote:
通篇未写自然的人工挖的“井”，构思有新意。


呵呵，谢读问好！
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 03:51:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
斗转星移
在一个风清月朗的夜晚
趴伏于高高的井沿
将脸贴向故乡
春风度过了玉门关


也喜欢最后的一节，寓意深刻～
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PostPosted: 2008-08-31 15:36:08    Post subject: Reply with quote
阿依琼裙 wrote:
斗转星移
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握！
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