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风敲开春天的大门(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2007-02-07 18:41:54    Post subject: 风敲开春天的大门(组诗) Reply with quote

风敲开春天的大门(组诗)

作者:剑熔

《挖荠菜》
摸着风的手
一场春雨之后
人们,被引领到山顶
一片片绿地
春天的一片片
鲜活的肺页

弯下腰去
用双目在绿色中搜寻
用双手在绿地上捡拾
阳光丢失的一枚枚
花边扣子

满目绿野里,那些碧绿的
肥大的花边扣子
在一阵阵惊喜的喊声里
躺进,人们的掌心

《一场春雨轻轻地飘着》
一场春雨悄悄来临
淋湿,大地干枯了一冬的思念

大地知道感恩
把那些心事透露给
阳光,和温煦的春风
绿的思绪
爬上丰满的肌肤

一场春雨轻轻地飘着
一场春雨,贵如油

《风敲开春天的大门》
风,用温柔的手
敲开春天的大门

广阔的家园
随之把鸟鸣,水声
鲜花,绿叶
诗意般,搬进
人们的眼里

人们醉眼相望
阳光,趁机偷走花的心事
和躲在一边的孩童
一起微笑

《笑声比蜜甜》
春天的列车按响长笛
出发了。风长的油菜花
一块块镀金的窗子
镶在绿色的车体上

潺潺流水伴着飞鸟,从车厢而过
阳光与月芽轮回出现
那些星星,行人的眼睛闪烁着希望
还有,网状的山路布满车厢

列车按响长笛
满载着诗画春天
和比蜜甜的笑声
风雨无阻,前行

《春到长蛇岭》
温暖的阳光,打开
春天这只巨型的花瓶
先是金黄的迎春花
挥舞着细长的手臂
最早,沿山底轻轻地向山顶跑去

三月来临,又一个日子
春风把阵阵芳香送到人们跟前
矿工一抬头,满山遍野的山桃花
在长蛇岭上微笑
如一片片火红的彩云
一只只点燃的心灯
让春天开始上路

鸟雀在花丛里奔走
叫醒沉睡的山岭
绿,画家泼墨一般
染尽大山。一股股溪流
吟唱着淳朴的民谣
翻山越岭而去

矿工,这些翻阅史书的火神
站在高高的煤山上
朝着远方瞭望。一列列满载阳光的列车
从山腹,忽然钻了出来
像新娘一样,头上
也插着艳丽的山花







作者简介:剑熔,原名李建荣,中国煤矿作家协会会员、陕西省作家协会会员、铜川市作家协会副主席,在国内外100多家报刊发表文学作品800多篇。




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PostPosted: 2007-02-07 20:20:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

肥大的花边扣子

比喻很好

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PostPosted: 2007-02-10 00:20:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏的诗歌,学习!
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PostPosted: 2007-02-10 02:14:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组写风景的诗歌,高兴看到它的浅显易懂,诗歌如果吸引更多的读者,字面就不要太晦涩,这是我的看法。
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