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《上访老油子》
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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 16:05:57    Post subject: 《上访老油子》 Reply with quote

《上访老油子》



46岁的二发子
是晋山镇有名的上访油子
前年开始上访到现在
成了全镇有名的刁民
新来的领导都要提防他



他拄着单拐
到过县,去过省
在中央某部委门前静坐
一个大领导还接见过他



他被门卫打过,保安踹过
让人砸过玻璃 柴垛放过火
在一个夜晚,
他的瘸老婆被人从背后袭击
被吓成了疯子



其实他上访的原因很简单
前年晋山屯在建新农村示范村的时候
做为钉子户
他的三间砖房被强行拆掉
左腿被房梁砸折
老爹也从房顶上掉下来摔死了



这些是一个管信访的副镇长告诉我的
他炫耀说,昨天二发子还让他踹过
对这样的刁民
就不能客气



老油子:处世经验多而油滑的人
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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 20:37:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

老油子 我们这里也有 不过当官的都怕他

当官的很少有干净的 所以怕告状的刁民
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PostPosted: 2008-08-25 21:08:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

有这样的事?!
这个地方的领导都是蠢货!新农村建设难道就是造新房子?!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-26 01:29:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

是对事实状况很有力的挖掘!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-26 03:05:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

百姓苦!诗歌运用反讽。很好。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-26 05:02:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

质朴的表达,喜欢。
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PostPosted: 2008-08-27 21:03:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢楼上各位诗!!!!!
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PostPosted: 2008-08-27 23:25:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

这诗写得好.现实中确有此事.
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PostPosted: 2008-08-28 01:29:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

这首诗很火爆呢!! Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-08-28 03:31:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

现实的揭露!所谓的人民公仆高高在上,百姓怎么会有好日子!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 02:12:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠 wrote:
有这样的事?!
这个地方的领导都是蠢货!新农村建设难道就是造新房子?!


现在到处在搞这种东西 。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 02:13:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

荷梦 wrote:
现实的揭露!所谓的人民公仆高高在上,百姓怎么会有好日子!



说得好!!!
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 02:14:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

子花 wrote:
这首诗很火爆呢!! Laughing


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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 02:15:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

秀水 wrote:
这诗写得好.现实中确有此事.


是的。很多。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 02:16:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

轻风吹我衣 wrote:
质朴的表达,喜欢。



谢谢!!1
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 02:40:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
百姓苦!诗歌运用反讽。很好。



最近网上流传的山东省村支部书记带领黑社会强拆民房的视频,让我有了创作此诗的想法,又结合了我们本地的一些事件,才写了这首诗。
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PostPosted: 2008-09-06 04:01:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

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