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《锁在抽屉里的信》
刘星源
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PostPosted: 2008-08-27 18:45:49    Post subject: 《锁在抽屉里的信》 Reply with quote

《锁在抽屉里的信》

这一场雨在久违的等待中终于到来了
是秋天了,这些天我渐渐发现
叶子们已开始由绿转黄,然后枯老、坠落
天空也变得越来越空旷、深邃
蚂蚁们也在抓紧准备着过冬的食粮
所有关乎生命的东西都在悄悄变化着
这个季节,我想我应该去做些什么

像每一年的秋天一样,天气稍一转凉
我想你的心便已蠢蠢欲动
我撑伞走进雨中,身体的右边还是被雨打湿了
可我的心里真温暖——
在你不在的日子里,我终于还是为你留下了
我左边的位置,因为我知道你不能淋雨
淋雨之后,你会着凉、会发烧、会咳嗽……

我想回一趟乡下,这时候庄稼肯定都成熟了
我想回去帮着父亲收获,虽然我不曾耕耘
我还想在这个季节完成一次梦寐以求的旅行
在世界之颠与那圣洁的雪峰对视,完成一次心的洗礼
可我终于还是把这些事情都放下了,因为我怕
我怕你回来时却找不到我,对了,忘了告诉你
我又搬家了,专门为你留下的新地址
我写在那所老房子的门上了:番水路7号

我想了很久,这个秋天我真的不能无所事事
当我正在写这封信的时候我就在想
明天,我要把这所房子打扫得干干静静
就像曾经你把那所老房子打扫得那样干净
我还要去我们曾携手散步的小路上走走
安慰一下路边想你的小草,说你就快回来了
另外,我还要准备在心里储存一些柴、一把火
以便熬过这个即将到来的没有你的严冬

山东省济宁职业技术学院经管学院07级物流2班刘星元
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刘星源,实名刘星元,山东苍山县人,八十年代末生。作品散见于《岁月》《辽河》《燕赵诗刊》《邯郸日报》《当代职校生》《躬耕》等刊,有作品入选多种选本。现就读于济宁某校。
联系我:lxy1987412@sina.com
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枫桥
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Joined: 28 May 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-08-27 19:51:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

起流畅,情绪一直缠绕这首诗,厚实加点苍劲、不像年轻人写的,
不错的情诗
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赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-08-28 04:32:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

沉淀些,或许效果更好.
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