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苍凉就像露水一样

舒中
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Joined: 11 Feb 2007
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舒中Collection

Posted: 2008-08-26 04:11:22 Post subject: 苍凉就像露水一样

苍凉就像露水一样舒中仿佛从天而降谁也不能去阻挡苍凉浸透了岁月红色且柔软的心遥望花朵固执地开放露水一样的苍凉呵伤害你并把你滋养花鹿踟蹰在生活的阡陌任何幸福都仰慕传统的悲伤就让星子更加明亮辉映你与生俱来的荣光最后的蝉贪婪吸吮无尽的苍凉以匍匐的姿势等待笑声。比露水更绵长早黄的叶子舒中天气还炎热雨水充足一枚叶子早黄了恋恋不舍通宵瑟缩曾经的愉悦在头顶闪烁纵横的脉络仿佛逃离肌肤话语随露水坠落从此开始疑惑更多的叶子招展魅力欲望蓬勃早黄的叶子视而不见把一夏天的浮燥咽下去踏实地睡着了梦里谁捧着千呼万唤都无动于衷表达，赶在叶子之前霉变

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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白水Collection

Posted: 2008-08-26 09:36:57 Post subject:

质感不错

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2008-08-26 20:51:22 Post subject:

表达，赶在叶子之前霉变...................有些句子不错.

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