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[原创]五绝-水墨牡丹

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-02-04 22:21:11 Post subject: [原创]五绝-水墨牡丹

素雅东风伴，娇容未饰丹。人知倾国色，谁晓历风寒？

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Posted: 2007-02-05 21:27:09 Post subject:

欣赏。不过感觉“素雅”和“未饰丹”意思差不多。浅见，说错谅/ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-02-05 23:31:06 Post subject:

呵呵，各抒己见吗！没关系的。

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Posted: 2007-02-06 01:53:29 Post subject:

雪MM大肚了：） _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-02-06 19:33:07 Post subject:

jj过誉喽！

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Posted: 2007-02-07 08:21:00 Post subject:

人知倾国色，谁晓历风寒？ _________________ 有如MM人品

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Posted: 2007-02-07 17:30:11 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

人知倾国色，谁晓历风寒？
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有如MM人品

过誉了GG，我会继续努力的。

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Posted: 2007-02-07 18:59:55 Post subject:

后两句好！问好莹雪

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Posted: 2007-02-08 01:43:22 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

人知倾国色，谁晓历风寒？
_________________
有如MM人品

过誉了GG，我会继续努力的。

这个GG真是古道热肠。哈哈。不知迷倒多少众生了。
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