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泪得自述
女中豪杰-四妹
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PostPosted: 2008-08-12 17:35:58    Post subject: 泪得自述 Reply with quote

泪的自诉
文/四妹

我是你眼眸里的宠物
可以抹去你眼眸里的尘埃与灰烬
我是你眼眸里的祸星
可以为你带来无尽的忧伤与烦躁

在你得意时
我安静的躺在你那水晶般的怀抱里
尽情地欣赏你那两面透明得不能再透明的天空

在你失意时
我不安分地淹没你那两个相互对称的地球
把个透明的你涂得一片模糊

在你成功时
我又溢出你的眼眶
我的每一个细胞,每一根神经都饱含你的热情与汗水

在你失败时
我那欲流的身躯却被你挡在防护林般的睫毛里面
隐藏着那一丝丝的苦涩

在你想家时
我充积在你的心头
消失在你的眼里

在你心中有梦时
我又悄悄地爬过你那浓密的防护林
滴落在你那潮湿得不能再潮湿的枕地

在你吃着庆功酒时
我依然滴落在你的酒里
融合着你的喜悦与欢愉、骄傲与自豪

在你心痛举杯痛饮时
我又同样跃进你的杯中
饱含着你的苦涩与哀伤、烦闷与无奈

在你风尘仆仆的人生旅途上
我伴随着你
在你生活的每一个时空,每一片天地
我都被你所拥有,所占据
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赵福治
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PostPosted: 2008-08-12 22:17:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻善感的表述.
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女中豪杰-四妹
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PostPosted: 2008-08-13 03:58:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
细腻善感的表述.



谢谢赵老师的点评 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-08-13 16:32:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏!
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女中豪杰-四妹
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PostPosted: 2008-08-16 08:22:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

kino wrote:
欣赏!


谢谢交流 Very Happy
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