曲元奇
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Joined: 01 Mar 2008
Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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绝望的河底
抓住我的影子
阳光下
石头像曝晒的鱼
我的影子
听到呼吸
我的汗水被蒸发着
我的影子在枯萎 |
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詩盜喜裸評
进士出身
Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
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| Posted: 2008-08-12 15:04:15 Post subject: |
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有後現代的影子。
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可情可理，去捧就真 |
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点点儿
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Joined: 12 Jan 2008
Posts: 413
Location: 眇小的地球
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| Posted: 2008-08-13 16:38:20 Post subject: |
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来这儿吸食点落尘
枯萎的枝
翘在冰的表面
地心的火
蔓延
在梦的另一边儿
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曲元奇
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Joined: 01 Mar 2008
Posts: 427
Location: 山东
曲元奇Collection |
| Posted: 2008-08-14 20:55:48 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢 |
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苏茉儿
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Joined: 31 Dec 2007
Posts: 739
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| Posted: 2008-08-16 06:35:50 Post subject: |
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下些雨就好拉。哈哈，，，短小精悍！
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-08-19 15:12:10 Post subject: |
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| 有后现代的呼吸 |
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拈花微笑
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Joined: 21 Jan 2008
Posts: 311
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| Posted: 2008-09-03 17:25:48 Post subject: |
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问好 
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曲元奇
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Joined: 01 Mar 2008
Posts: 427
Location: 山东
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| Posted: 2008-09-03 21:09:05 Post subject: |
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| 多谢 |
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红袖添乱
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Joined: 09 Jan 2008
Posts: 778
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| Posted: 2008-09-04 05:50:30 Post subject: |
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再读，还是会觉得那影子会颤动和弯曲。。。拱着腰的样子
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