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Posted: 2008-07-23 19:39:25 Post subject: 千年等一回

心在天涯梦了千年身在海角练了千年世界在睡梦里却从来没有停止变迁春秋更替时光过了一年又一年 -- 有谁见哪一个羽化而登了仙当春暖花开的时候在彩霞满天的那刻还有那那彩虹腾空的瞬间你始终不肯轻易地醒转那不是因为你害怕生命的短暂那不是因为你喜欢沉湎于甜美的梦魇你痴痴等待的原来是空空的思念不愿放弃命里难舍的情缘让因的果落在莲花般盛开的指尖

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Posted: 2008-07-24 17:07:50 Post subject:

结尾出彩！千年万代何如？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-24 17:20:40 Post subject:

【让因的果落在莲花般盛开的指尖】

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Posted: 2008-07-25 07:20:16 Post subject:

等.

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Posted: 2008-07-29 21:25:10 Post subject:

在不雾（悟）中等等雾（悟）了升 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-07-31 06:54:00 Post subject:

愁云化雨是有情 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-08-03 21:28:55 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

结尾出彩！千年万代何如？

好啊，千秋万代！

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Posted: 2008-08-03 21:30:10 Post subject:

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【让因的果落在莲花般盛开的指尖】

嗨，不容易拿到。

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Posted: 2008-08-03 21:32:15 Post subject:

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愁云化雨是有情

呵呵，看着看着，就有点不行了（天就变了脸）。

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Posted: 2008-08-04 07:54:18 Post subject:

如果有来生，我和有缘兄约好了，重新认识一下吧。。哈哈，，，玩笑。再读还是感动！ _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-08-05 07:02:29 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

如果有来生，我和有缘兄约好了，重新认识一下吧。。哈哈，，，玩笑。再读还是感
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好吧，那就这么说好，你认识缘兄，我认识诗盗。
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Posted: 2008-08-05 09:54:59 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

苏茉儿 wrote:

如果有来生，我和有缘兄约好了，重新认识一下吧。。哈哈，，，玩笑。再读还是感
...

好吧，那就这么说好，你认识缘兄，我认识诗盗。

好呀，转来转去，物归原处。。。人不能违背天意。。。
只是苦了有缘兄了。。。
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Posted: 2008-08-05 10:05:56 Post subject:

奇怪那，，，丢字的。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-08-05 11:25:15 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

苏茉儿 wrote:

如果有来生，我和有缘兄约好了，重新认识一下吧。。哈哈，，，玩笑。再读还是感
...

好吧，那就这么说好，你认识缘兄，我认识诗盗。

好呀，转来转去，物归原处。。。人不能违背天意。。。
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哈哈~~~~
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Posted: 2008-08-05 12:21:23 Post subject:

你还笑，，，有缘兄不定哪哭去啦。。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-08-05 12:23:01 Post subject:

没人那，俺刚添饱独自，，过来改两字，，，嗯，我独自节目去了。。。。 _________________ 默默无言处，盈盈一笑间。

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Posted: 2008-08-05 20:44:09 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

如果有来生，我和有缘兄约好了，重新认识一下吧。。哈哈，，，玩笑。再读还是感
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好啊，不知到时候还记不记得今生曾经相识过。

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Posted: 2008-08-05 20:45:32 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

苏茉儿 wrote:

如果有来生，我和有缘兄约好了，重新认识一下吧。。哈哈，，，玩笑。再读还是感
...

好吧，那就这么说好，你认识缘兄，我认识诗盗。

看到了，也装不认识？

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Posted: 2008-08-05 20:48:07 Post subject:

苏茉儿 wrote:

红袖添乱 wrote:

苏茉儿 wrote:

如果有来生，我和有缘兄约好了，重新认识一下吧。。哈哈，，，玩笑。再读还是感
...

好吧，那就这么说好，你认识缘兄，我认识诗盗。

好呀，转来转去，物归原处。。。人不能违背天意。。。
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这个谜，哑得很，不怎么明白。

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Posted: 2008-08-05 20:54:59 Post subject:

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你还笑，，，有缘兄不定哪哭去啦。。。。

对着春雨的江南、缤纷的花海、无际的天空、找不到的梦。。。。
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