是有缘
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（和文学城诗坛诗友）
风吹草动过横塘，
雨打花飞坠夕阳。
月亮河边寻月亮，
清凉山上觅清凉。 |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2008-07-22 06:16:53 Post subject: |
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"月亮河边寻月亮
清凉山上觅清凉"
句子首尾巧妙照应,得廻环之趋.
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-07-23 19:22:44 Post subject: |
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谢先生评。问黄老师好！
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蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2008-07-23 21:00:34 Post subject: |
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| 欣赏。 |
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金沙浪子
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Joined: 21 Jul 2008
Posts: 128
Location: 亚洲 中国云南 昭通巧家
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| Posted: 2008-07-23 21:36:02 Post subject: |
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月亮河边寻月亮，
清凉山上觅清凉。
好情趣！
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山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。
过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 20:53:38 Post subject: |
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| 多谢莹雪雅赏。 |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-07-29 20:55:06 Post subject: |
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| 与金兄同雅一回。 |
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