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归田乐引·郊游
成之
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PostPosted: 2008-07-29 03:22:55    Post subject: 归田乐引·郊游 Reply with quote

  独立城郊晚。沐薰风、花疏水浅,芳草天涯远。听苇塘深处,蛙鼓一片。夕掩黄昏众星显。
  喧哗声不见。喜漫步轻盈,老怀舒展。问章寻典,择句吟长短。待更阑人静,细心裁剪。夜夜清灯照书卷。


  注:古人称词为“长短句”,意谓词的句式参差不一。
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2008-07-29 04:11:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

意境佳美.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-29 05:22:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
意境佳美.


谢版主赏评,问好!
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野航
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PostPosted: 2008-07-29 15:24:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

听苇塘深处,蛙鼓一片

勾起许多回忆。
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是有缘
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PostPosted: 2008-07-29 20:33:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

好词。一气呵成。
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