成之 童生
Joined: 26 Jul 2008 Posts: 44 Location: 中国大庆 成之Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-29 03:22:55 Post subject: 归田乐引·郊游 |
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独立城郊晚。沐薰风、花疏水浅,芳草天涯远。听苇塘深处,蛙鼓一片。夕掩黄昏众星显。
喧哗声不见。喜漫步轻盈,老怀舒展。问章寻典,择句吟长短。待更阑人静,细心裁剪。夜夜清灯照书卷。
注:古人称词为“长短句”,意谓词的句式参差不一。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-29 04:11:00 Post subject: |
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意境佳美. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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成之 童生
Joined: 26 Jul 2008 Posts: 44 Location: 中国大庆 成之Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-29 05:22:14 Post subject: |
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谢版主赏评,问好! |
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野航 秀才
Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 547 Location: toronto 野航Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-29 15:24:53 Post subject: |
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听苇塘深处,蛙鼓一片
勾起许多回忆。 _________________ 回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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是有缘 秀才
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 741
是有缘Collection |
Posted: 2008-07-29 20:33:36 Post subject: |
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好词。一气呵成。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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