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人淡如菊

悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-29 04:23:43 Post subject: 人淡如菊

天最澄蓝的时候眼睛才会渐渐清澈收敛一些散不去的黑色和白那些来了又走的云那些得到又失去的风景在热过又冷过的季节恍然间流溢过来曾经绯红的微笑有些苍白曾经明亮的月光倾泻黯淡喧嚣的城市向着荒野凄迷灯红酒绿踏寻身单影只的沉寂风吹干了伤心的雨雨打湿了风的忧郁梦幻用岁月刻下真实心灵在尘埃里涤洗澄明人淡如菊破碎一些完整的记忆平展一些褶皱的往昔携空空而满满的希望承载别而未别的时光 07/29/2008

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-07-29 08:36:49 Post subject:

喜欢，一、二踏实，后头偏虚。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-29 08:43:21 Post subject:

踏迅？？啥意思？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-07-29 08:50:57 Post subject:

剪剪！！人淡如菊BY悠子天最澄蓝的时候眼睛才会渐渐清澈收敛一些散不去的黑色和白曾经喧嚣的城市，凄迷曾经明亮的月光，黯淡曾经绯红的微笑，苍白灯红酒绿的身影，孤单单沉寂雨洒下一些伤心，风吹过一些忧郁岁月刻下真实，心灵在尘埃里涤洗承载别而未别的时光携空虚而又满的希望人淡如菊来了又走的云，得到又失去的风景在热过又冷过的季节恍然间流溢 PS.剪剪詩詞只代表個人喜好，本人以往之績效不保證此次最低之效果，不負責剪剪前或後之成敗。撰寫者於貼文前應詳閱本版公開說明書。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-29 09:13:35 Post subject: 温柔而致命的打击~

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

喜欢，一、二踏实，后头偏虚。

悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-29 09:19:07 Post subject: 免费剪~

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

剪剪！！
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悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-29 09:21:18 Post subject: 哦，白字。“寻”

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

踏迅？？啥意思？

是有缘
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Posted: 2008-07-29 20:58:45 Post subject:

空是一下，满亦一下！ _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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Posted: 2008-07-30 08:11:55 Post subject:

菊淡如人 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-07-30 18:54:20 Post subject:

读了好几遍原作与诗盗兄的剪剪贴真是‘’删繁就简三秋树‘’

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2008-07-31 06:46:00 Post subject:

我觉得都好。很有内容/ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-31 07:40:51 Post subject: 嗯

是有缘 wrote:

空是一下，满亦一下！

悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-31 07:41:21 Post subject: 菊淡如你~

拈花微笑 wrote:

菊淡如人

悠子
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Posted: 2008-07-31 07:45:20 Post subject: 把反义词放在一起的好处？

曲元奇 wrote:

读了好几遍原作与诗盗兄的剪剪贴真是‘’删繁就简三秋树‘’

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