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七绝小鸟重返蓝天

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-07-19 12:24:48 Post subject: 七绝小鸟重返蓝天

周末,偕家人围坐闲聊,忽惊门外砰然有声,不知何物撞击玻璃门,速探视之,乃见一小鸟撞落草丛,其惊恐之状,令人顿生怜惜.家人速议何以施救.俄顷,小鸟长鸣一声,向远空飞遁.小小生命,有惊无恐,幸甚!因以记之. 窗明尽处疑空阔奋翅飞来误撞头跌落草丛惶恐甚蓝天昊昊复翔游 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

戴玨
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Posted: 2008-07-19 13:23:24 Post subject:

藍天的簡體應該是“蓝天”吧？ _________________ I labour by singing light 我的blog 我的專欄

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2008-07-19 15:52:59 Post subject:

谢谢指正.问好!已改正. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

松云老人
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Posted: 2008-07-19 16:35:31 Post subject:

黄兄实乃仁爱长者！此诗可鉴。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-07-19 18:45:19 Post subject:

与松老同感。

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2008-07-20 04:35:43 Post subject:

松云兄庆宏过奖.谢谢! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

野航
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Posted: 2008-07-22 03:28:11 Post subject:

黄老师家在何处? _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-07-22 05:26:43 Post subject:

我现在住址: 20 marblemount cres torono, on canada mit 2h4 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

金沙浪子
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Posted: 2008-07-24 23:26:58 Post subject:

很情趣的诗句。非慈仁者莫能为之。浪子问好！ _________________ 山间十载槐香梦，世井一茬走马春。过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-07-25 04:38:34 Post subject:

谢谢金沙浪子阅赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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