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一切才刚刚开始

冷巉
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Posted: 2008-07-24 21:25:42 Post subject: 一切才刚刚开始

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半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-07-25 00:49:16 Post subject:

静默中　　一种奇妙　　一种存在的暗影　　树正搂紧大地　　只有皈依才可以温暖自己很好的感悟，后一首到是说出了远方有佳人诗歌的一些特质~

冷巉
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Posted: 2008-08-14 12:47:42 Post subject:

谢谢姐姐。问好！ _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-08-15 06:02:22 Post subject:

树正搂紧大地　　只有皈依才可以温暖自己　　悟 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

阿依琼裙
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Posted: 2008-08-15 06:02:55 Post subject:

树正搂紧大地　　只有皈依才可以温暖自己　　悟 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2008-08-19 13:34:38 Post subject:

凝练利落！ _________________ 晴宝儿

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