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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 03:21:25    Post subject: 虐待 Reply with quote

虐待

词组,刺痛的
于老人,于孩子,于
躯体, 情感乃至灵魂 肆虐着我
疲倦的眼睛

游离的瞳仁
落在你润滑的脚面还有趾尖
玛瑙般的贝壳
悄悄拉扯贴身的丝袜
惨不忍睹的脚踝
遮掩着
什么?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 04:05:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好,是不是题图诗?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 04:24:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

玛瑙般的贝壳
悄悄拉扯贴身的丝袜
惨不忍睹的脚踝
遮掩着
什么?
..............追问.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 05:04:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

落在你润滑的脚面还有趾尖
玛瑙般的贝壳

刺痛在哪里
需要图片说明
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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 06:03:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

好象是写新闻吧~
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 06:35:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

冲浪, 赵福治,PEACE,月亮,谢谢你们的阅读和关心。 这篇随笔算是给你们的回帖吧。不好意思, 照片还真没有Embarassed

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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 08:14:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

给人思考 前面很有诗意 上去
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 19:05:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

我喜欢这种教学方式。这是真正的教学,解决实际问题。这个问题,不仅仅是社会问题,还应当上升为人性和哲学层面,就好解决了。

不客气地说,散文比诗歌好,诗歌让人误解了。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 19:21:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱,属于感性范畴,尤其本能的爱,深刻地爱,所以为什么家庭暴力和爱密不可分,为什么会出现因为爱一个人,所以要杀掉他。那个黑人姑娘很坦诚,恰恰一些白人姑娘故作清高,忽视人的原始的成分。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 19:27:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
我喜欢这种教学方式。这是真正的教学,解决实际问题。这个问题,不仅仅是社会问题,还应当上升为人性和哲学层面,就好解决了。
不客气地说,散文比诗歌好,诗歌让人误解了。
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冲浪, 你说的有些道理. 诗歌只写了几个画面, 而没细写画面产生的原因, 有了留白, 就有了读者不同的想象空间, 误解是很正常的.就这首诗歌而言, 我还可以逐句给朋友们直译出另一个搞笑的故事. 可以说和我散文中写的事同时发生的吧.但那只是促使我写此诗的某个闪念,而不是我写作的本意.而散文却更便于论述.
谢谢你, 何时有空, 好好与你探讨一下文学创作. 这是你的强项 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 19:29:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

莞君 wrote:
给人思考 前面很有诗意 上去


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PostPosted: 2008-07-26 19:36:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
爱,属于感性范畴,尤其本能的爱,深刻地爱,所以为什么家庭暴力和爱密不可分,为什么会出现因为爱一个人,所以要杀掉他。那个黑人姑娘很坦诚,恰恰一些白人姑娘故作清高,忽视人的原始的成分。



冲浪, 那是个白人姑娘. Embarassed
ANYWAY, 黑人, 白人并不重要, 只是观察东西方文化的差异吧. 承认差异, 理解差异, 接受差异,,,,,,,猜想彼此互补更能推动人类文明发展吧.
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