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沙漠
秀才


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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 05:37:25    Post subject: 桥 Reply with quote

夜歌

周遭的动静,触不到我的内心
长大后,炊烟短了,虫鸣稀了
井沿边榕树下,七叔八婶擦亮的夜
爬上了一层层青苔。爷爷
熏蚊的湿草堆里,一粒残存的火星
时不时幽灵般地灼一下我的记忆
儿时的池塘,轻易就搬下天上的棋盘
现在,我一身尘土一双白眼
只在释然时分,从悠悠流水中
捞起那分喜悦和神思




我收拢被诱惑的思绪,缓步
穿过鼓噪的虫鸣,青瓷碗一样
盛住你安谧的眼神
我从山上下来,珍藏着
小麦的色泽和野果的呼吸
使我自然细致地切入你的脉搏
小草绿进我的栅栏
生活长出新的轨迹。在此岸
我窥视了紫菜的一生和风暴的过程
面对不变的涛声
我变得更加急切和柔软


暴雨后

如果阳光如约,我可能会
在它的拐弯处撞见七色
现在,枝上传来鸟鸣
比雨前快了些。这抽身雨外的心情
却濡满沉沉的水气
她要烘干多年染就的丝线
绣一个球抛向异乡
留守的人,在一堆湿柴里
极尽想象,细数过往和明天


砌墙记

天黑下来,那些石头就亮了
凿子和琴弦,有种天然的隐秘关联
都把一生砌进了墙,却难以堵住墙缝里
流出的叹息。不知道我可不可以塞下桃核
以此作为一个春天的墓志铭

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白水
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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 18:11:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

儿时的池塘,轻易就搬下天上的棋盘

形象,传神
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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2008-07-23 20:30:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯净,空明,灵秀.尽管语言较为散文化,但富有诗情画意,

即使不分行,也是包含诗意的文字.令人喜欢.

感谢沙漠.
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2008-07-24 06:51:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

三首都不错,更喜欢后两首~
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沙漠
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PostPosted: 2008-07-25 22:28:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好几位.修改一下.
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