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大漠苍狼

红袖添乱
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Posted: 2008-07-17 10:50:11 Post subject: 大漠苍狼

我们，大漠的苍狼风沙中征服，落日下传衍生存，挣扎，拼搏，制胜是世代不灭的血性我们厮杀鹰蟒身怀不愈的伤长啸是出征的号角响彻寒风，粗犷而激昂冷月下生，孤烟里长西行于一顷沙浪破霜而出，饮血而亡我们是大漠的苍狼 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-17 10:55:35 Post subject:

很粗犷而激昂 ~

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Posted: 2008-07-17 10:58:54 Post subject:

很槑，很囧，很雷人。。。。俺完全Orz了！这是一匹率性的狼，它不槑，谁槑？这是一匹激情的狼，它不囧，谁囧？这是一匹自由的狼，它不雷，谁雷？袖儿居然能写出如此刚烈的边塞诗，俺真正好Orz...... 槑囧Orz雷......哈哈哈 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2008-07-17 11:23:55 Post subject:

虽然你很槑，我还是被你雷了，orz~~~~~~~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-17 11:25:29 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

很粗犷而激昂 ~

就是，不就是卷袖子吗，我试试看别的
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梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，
而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-17 12:00:01 Post subject: 再卷裤腿

红袖添乱 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

很粗犷而激昂 ~

就是，不就是卷袖子吗，我试试看别的

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Posted: 2008-07-17 12:01:37 Post subject: 槑，囧.......我是被闷住了(啥字?)

拈花微笑 wrote:

很槑，很囧，很雷人。。。。俺完全Orz了！
...

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Posted: 2008-07-17 12:22:16 Post subject:

哈哈h~~ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-17 20:40:26 Post subject:

嘿，这狼会挑地方（图片）。拈花微笑的正体火星文配得有意思，拿它们再写一个吧？这方面的字多少也用到了象形与会意精神，有人出本这方面的字典就更有意思了。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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Posted: 2008-07-20 08:05:34 Post subject:

我也........Orz......... _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-20 17:52:34 Post subject:

一向婉约今又豪放

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Posted: 2008-07-21 20:14:46 Post subject:

有点被惊吓的感觉：狼来了？好厉害！赶紧给你让道。 _________________ 蜻蜓点水非无意愁云化雨是有情

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