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夏日杂咏
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 09:01:15    Post subject: 夏日杂咏 Reply with quote

夏日杂咏

在下打油,权当谜语三则,以博一笑,或可助君略消烦暑也.


圆圆绿袄恰合身 瓤脆心红不染尘
夏日炎炎能却暑 飨君止渴并生津


蘑菇形状显夸张 手臂轻扬抗燥阳
大雨滂沱无避处 友人送物实难忘


熏风徐徐暖晴沙 对对双双戏水涯
反朴归真惊俗眼 一丝不挂类鱼虾
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 15:15:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

西瓜,伞,电扇?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 15:29:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏黄老佳作。问好黄老!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 15:57:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

庆宏猜中前两个,第三个还得猜一猜.

谢莹雪雅赏.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-17 16:22:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄兄的诗迷都写得这般工整,喜欢!
庆宏很有本事,猜中两个!
这第三个确难。也没给个范围?是不是眼睛啊?
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 06:12:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

第三个谜语猜一消夏水边运动.

再出一个谜语,猜室内运动一.


脚踏刀鞋走似飞 一杆在手满场挥

穷追猛打小圆饼 为夺金杯奏凯
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 06:16:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

对不起!掉了最后一个"归"字.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 12:09:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

室内运动是冰球。水边运动费猜详。大概是冲浪滑板。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 12:25:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
室内运动是冰球。水边运动费猜详。大概是冲浪滑板。
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 14:09:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

猜冰球运动,完全正确!

在水边反朴归真而"一丝不挂"者,裸泳爱好之徒也!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 14:35:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

从字面上看,原本首先想到裸泳,但因观念陈旧吧,故意避开了。呵呵!
此活动与奥运密切相关,盼黄版带大家继续玩下去!同时又出一部好诗!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-18 18:56:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

猜猜谜语只不过让大家轻松消暑,我那几则打油,不敢言诗,

当然,有兴趣的朋友,可以接着玩下去.谢谢松云兄美意.
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PostPosted: 2008-07-19 03:35:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

反朴归真惊俗眼 一丝不挂类鱼虾
有趣!
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PostPosted: 2008-07-22 05:04:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢野航赏.
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