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《伊出嫁了》

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Posted: 2008-07-13 10:37:47 Post subject: 《伊出嫁了》

告别过去就是一个新的开始可是伊好像从来就没有过过去一切都是那么刻骨铭心也是刻骨铭心般的遗忘风不再吟诵夜晚的寂寞吾始终是遥远的没有回忆就没有遗忘伊如天上漂流的云彩变换着姿势狂欢远处有歌声传来熟悉的凄苦还有，一个女人的一切期待，颂扬雨拍打娇挠着奏出一股股优美激荡的旋律 _________________ －－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-07-13 12:07:55 Post subject:

很强烈的感觉~~ 变换着姿势狂欢是个很不错的句子 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-13 13:36:14 Post subject: 可以很劲哒实践～嘻

红袖添乱 wrote:

很强烈的感觉~~

变换着姿势
狂欢

是个很不错的句子

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－－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-07-13 13:36:51 Post subject: 可以很劲哒实践～嘻

红袖添乱 wrote:

很强烈的感觉~~

变换着姿势
狂欢

是个很不错的句子

_________________
－－－其实你永远不懂我的心－－－

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Posted: 2008-07-14 06:44:02 Post subject:

就是说。。。？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-07-14 08:49:48 Post subject:

像是从云端往下看！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-07-14 15:51:42 Post subject:

很强烈的感觉~~ (ZT)

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Posted: 2008-07-17 00:45:22 Post subject:

【很强烈的感觉】我觉得是遥远而又眼前的空间

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Posted: 2008-07-17 07:12:24 Post subject: 曲兄的叙述较贴近。

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【很强烈的感觉】我觉得是遥远而又眼前的空间

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Posted: 2008-07-17 20:31:20 Post subject:

出嫁是告别过去，很强烈的比喻。我倒想起唐婉的「釵頭鳳」。又想，现代女性，很多是再嫁才开始告别过去，找到自我与新生，时代的转变吧。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

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